Still a work in progress but looking to release this track and more in two months, still working on recording the video clip. Any feedback is appreciated, Thx
tatsama
sounding very nice man.. lovely chill vibe with the synths and a driving groove with the beat.. good work.. you should defintaly finish this up... vocals would go nicely i think.
Wayn0
I love 1:30 - 2:07 :-) I challenge anyone to make a bad tune out of that chord sequence :p
Richard Butler
Good melodious traction here. I find the kick little lost in places.
Good ole trancer this.
Peter Campbell
thx tatsama..Wayn0 thax for that will do the same for the ending now to. Good one Richard, I find the kick needs work also, anything els??
Sh!fty
1th thing I noticed was the transition of the intro into the beat. Doesn't match.
2nd the weak kick, can be alot punchier (as ppl already pointed out)
the atmosphere of the track can be improved, try some dynamic panning on that lower pad!
Last thing that strook me was the structure of the track.. break was nice but after the track lost energy for me.. it seems to be going nowhere...
I enjoyed listening tough :)
Peter Campbell
quote:
Originally posted by Sh!fty
1th thing I noticed was the transition of the intro into the beat. Doesn't match.
2nd the weak kick, can be alot punchier (as ppl already pointed out)
the atmosphere of the track can be improved, try some dynamic panning on that lower pad!
Last thing that strook me was the structure of the track.. break was nice but after the track lost energy for me.. it seems to be going nowhere...
I enjoyed listening tough :)
thx so much Sh!fty just what I needed to hear, will take into account everything you said
Raphie
ok first of all, heavenly piano in the break, great progression.
bit more work on the kick indeed (try to layer a snare/hat, or take one of NEXUS Vengeance type kicks) I would challenge you to leverage the break pianopart to an oldskool epic build up with string/saw layering and have an epic 16 measures of full-on Corsten/Armin type after the break. This progession is too good to stay in the fluffy Anjuna type mellow mood.
TranceLover007
Will give proper listening tomorrow (sorry, typing from my phone in the bead).
Cheers man,
Darek
TranceLover007
Finally have a chance to listen and comment on this production lol.
Melodic part in this track is really nice, kind of getting you suck in to it lol but I think that you still have some extra room for improvement. Structure development strictly depend on producer idea/concept where this journey suppose to take us lol. From my perspective mix and mastering will still need same more polishing in order to take this track to another level.
So far so good, like where you going with it.
Cheers,
Darek
Peter Campbell
quote:
Originally posted by TranceLover007
From my perspective mix and mastering will still need same more polishing in order to take this track to another level.
So far so good, like where you going with it.
Cheers,
Darek
Thx Darek for having a listen, I value your opinion heaps as I see you as an up and comming pro.
Iam still undecided with this track which way its going
TranceLover007
I would love to encourage you to work on/finish this track as I could see sweet potential in it, don't give up on it lol.
