Hey.. This is my first track and its far from finished i know its missing something but not to sure as to what is missing.. as i said its my first track so was jus looking for some proffessional advice as to what needs to be touched up... cheers
Hi
This song lacks low end. Your bass and kick are almost non audiable.
I'm also hearing that some of your arps are not hiting the correct notes.
Learn the basics of scales.
Try bringing in a lead after the break.
Goodluck.
Peter Campbell
Hey im no proffessional but for your first track man your on your way just dont stop.. now that drum kick needs a better sample and them synths need to shine some more.. nice dark feel takes me off to 3am this one..cool..
Wipperjaw
Ye cheers.. I know its missin a lot but then again ive still got a lot to learn.. Im mainly here for harsh but constructive critisism... Will take your comments into account.. Thank you
Progate
It's good for a first try. In my opinion it's missing:
- good kick with more bass
- snares, claps, hits and all other percuission things...
It still needs a lot of work but keep up working!
Wipperjaw
Thanks for the comments.. appreciate the lot... will get crackin at it now
Wipperjaw
TOOK INTO CONSIDERATION AND FIX A FEW ERROS IN THIS SONG......... STILL WORKING HARD ON GETTING THAT PERFECT DEEP KICK....
SO HERE YA GO... HOPE ITS AN IMPROVEMENT AND DATS ITS ON THE RIGHT TRACK TO BEEN HALF DECENT....
THE SONG IS AIMED TO BE A COME DOWN SONG... 1 OF WICH WOULD SUIT THE MIDNIGHT MOON AND HELP SET A DEEP VIBE... HOPE YAS SENSE THAT
It is a improvement, but i would suggest to move onto a different project. Best way to learn is to produce produce and produce. Not trying to fix something that your probably not capable of at the moment. Then Later on you can work on this track when you have more production experience.
This melody is not nothing to waste time on, I think everyone has been there at some point.
Goodluck
Wipperjaw
Ye your probably right... have another few projects im workin on at the moment... better start showing them some love
