No mastering at all, just put through a limiter for now. Wanting to get the mix and everything right first.
Julz
I find the bass really weak, the mid bass plucks or what ever they are are annoying.
During the break that sharp string that come in for a bar is really sharp, but the piano is nice. The pluck reminds me of requim for a dream theme song :)
The first break is boring, nothing happens. you break down again and its pretty much the same except for a mau5 style chord stab.
Once again the break has no impact, i'm waiting for something to happen.
Hope this helps.
Trancelover03591
I think the song has potential and I can definitely tell you have a talent for producing. I think it just needs a little more honing. I Don't really know how to critique the song. It just doesn't stick out to me much and have much punch but it isn't bad.
Now, the mask. Do you know where it is from? It looks Mississippian to me maybe Iroquois.
EddieZilker
Doesn't really draw me in until the first break, right before it pushes me back out with not enough bass while every other frequency is a little too upfront (albeit, not necessarily brick-walled). Mix doesn't have depth unless its on the breaks - where it's pulling me away from concentrating on writing (this review and an e-mail).
The breaks are lush and deep. The drops, particularly after the second break, are interesting and I love the concepts. The mix (apart from the breaks), however, is just pushing me out like a twenty-one year-old step-son from a previous marriage with no source of income and a bad drinking habit.
Beatflux
Track doesn't have a climax.
TranceLover007
Hey Rich my friend, I have a bit different opinion on this WIP the all of those previous guys but I thing that we all agree on one thing that this track will need some additional work/adjustment or I would call it "face lift" lol. Like the intro + some parts from the whole production and believe that with extra addition of Techno-House elements will give this track necessary spark/energy or groove to keep it interesting and wanting by any listener, IMO.
Give some extra boost to this bass line, let it serve the purpose ;)
Cheers,
Darek
Rodri Santos
man this has potential in a glimpse what this needs is:
-Offbeat bass is "too offbeat" looks annoying for me i'd restructure it.
-The automation of the pitched sound is a bit harsh take a look at it when mixing, there are some sounds that are very harsh and acid.
What i like apart from the rhytm is the breakdowns, excellent sound design here.
