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Apprantly my track sounds like a copy of Pryda! (pg. 2)
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| TranceLover007 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Targus28
Cheers trancelover |
Which one ??? lol :haha: |
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| Targus28 |
| quote: | Originally posted by TranceLover007
Which one ??? lol :haha: |
Oh, theres two of you, haha
Trancelover03591 :) |
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| Trancelover03591 |
lol.
For the records it's my fault, he had the name before I did and I completely admit that. I might have subconsciously seen it before but I didn't consciously realize it when I chose this name. |
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| TranceLover007 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Targus28
Oh, theres two of you, haha
Trancelover03591 :) |
Oh, well, sorry about that, no more comment from me then lol :stongue:
Cheers,
Darek |
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| jayxthekoolest |
| quote: | Originally posted by Targus28
Give me some feedback on how i could livin it up a bit if you can mate, im all up for improving.What is boring, do you mean i need more sounds, the way the sounds are, needs more ffects, fillers, more bass? Melody?
Cheers trancelover |
It's boring because - while you have managed to do a good job of creating an atmosphere, some good synthesis and good mixing - you have failed at doing the most important thing - creating the point of the track. You need to have something happen. Your track has the sense of going somewhere, but it feels like it never gets there. Your whole track basically just sounds like the intro to something that could be a song. So, I'd recommend trying to find a melody that you can really use as the lead and as the point of the track. |
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| Targus28 |
| quote: | Originally posted by jayxthekoolest
It's boring because - while you have managed to do a good job of creating an atmosphere, some good synthesis and good mixing - you have failed at doing the most important thing - creating the point of the track. You need to have something happen. Your track has the sense of going somewhere, but it feels like it never gets there. Your whole track basically just sounds like the intro to something that could be a song. So, I'd recommend trying to find a melody that you can really use as the lead and as the point of the track. |
Im gonna give my ears a rest tonight, and work on the focal point of the track, thanks for your feedback mate, really appreciated |
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| jayxthekoolest |
| quote: | Originally posted by Targus28
Im gonna give my ears a rest tonight, and work on the focal point of the track, thanks for your feedback mate, really appreciated |
Honestly, it's not a big deal at all that you're not doing this. It's just a part of learning how to make music. |
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| TranceLover007 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Targus28
Im gonna give my ears a rest tonight, and work on the focal point of the track, thanks for your feedback mate, really appreciated |
But be aware this focal point issue may force you to completely restructure your track and that can drive you crazy, so don't give up and let us know what did you come up with !!!
Cheers,
Darek |
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| jayxthekoolest |
| quote: | Originally posted by TranceLover007
But be aware this focal point issue may force you to completely restructure your track and that can drive you crazy, so don't give up and let us know what did you come up with !!!
Cheers,
Darek |
Definitely true! Don't be afraid to erase everything and start over from your best idea. I have done this many times. |
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| Targus28 |
| quote: | Originally posted by jayxthekoolest
Honestly, it's not a big deal at all that you're not doing this. It's just a part of learning how to make music. |
Could you elaborate on this for me mate, sorry, i just havent fully got what you mean |
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| Targus28 |
| quote: | Originally posted by TranceLover007
But be aware this focal point issue may force you to completely restructure your track and that can drive you crazy, so don't give up and let us know what did you come up with !!!
Cheers,
Darek |
Thanks Darek i will post up what i have |
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| jayxthekoolest |
| quote: | Originally posted by Targus28
Could you elaborate on this for me mate, sorry, i just havent fully got what you mean |
I'm just saying don't worry that if, when you go to write a track, that you end up getting something that doesn't quite makes sense. |
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