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Newbie producer needing cirticism (any will help)
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| Mr. Le |
I've been working pretty hard at this track, even though it is not finished. I would very much appreciate any and all criticism. thanks all! link is below.
Leave Me Alone (Unfinished) |
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| Mr. Le |
Where is embed? sorry everybody here it is!
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| EddieZilker |
This is actually quite good. I would put just a little bit more bass back on the kick and maybe do some more variation in your high-hats; particularly on the drop but , this is really good.
Percs are a little sparse, too, and some things could pull back. If you're going to delete anything, start with the hats and rework some of those. But other than that, this is a pretty impressive first showing. You should be proud of this, man.
EDIT: Also, if you're using multi-band compression to master with, your mix is a little loud in the high-end. Proportionally, everything is there, but I would tread very lightly, self-mastering, if I were you.
Another thing that occurred to me is that the lead on the break may come in just a little too softly. I think you should ease up on some of the compression you've got going but don't neglect that lead, when/if you do. |
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| RobertAllen |
| This is really good, man! I really like it. The only suggestion I have is that maybe introduce some different melodies. Other than that, I'm not much to talk. Much better than anything I could produce! |
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| Mr. Le |
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Percs are a little sparse, too, and some things could pull back. If you're going to delete anything, start with the hats and rework some of those. But other than that, this is a pretty impressive first showing. You should be proud of this, man.
EDIT: Also, if you're using multi-band compression to master with, your mix is a little loud in the high-end. Proportionally, everything is there, but I would tread very lightly, self-mastering, if I were you.
Another thing that occurred to me is that the lead on the break may come in just a little too softly. I think you should ease up on some of the compression you've got going but don't neglect that lead, when/if you do. |
Thank you Eddie! I will do some more editing to the track, and will finish. I will post finished product on soundcloud. I am very greatful for your criticism. Thank you also RobertAllen, I will add a different melody! Will post again on TA with a couple samples! Hope I can use both yours and Eddie's advice to produce something better! |
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