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jf2010
Hi peeps

Im new to TA although been always looking around on here.. just finshed my first 2 proper tracks and would be great to get some feedback on them as i cant judge what they sound like at this stage mixing wise etc..


http://soundcloud.com/joeyfaherty2010/last-rites




http://soundcloud.com/joeyfaherty2010/kallamandra



(Not sure how to embed the soundcloud links)


cheers!

JF
Domesty
[QUOTE]Originally posted by Domesty
Well if you dont want comments about the content i won't, but the Mix seems OK.

I listened the second song whole, it was more interesting

The kick is still bothering me, You could just make it just a little bit tighter and i cant seem to hear is it properly cut ( can be a soundcloud distort). And the clap seems to be pretty mono and doesn't have space. You could make it's tail a little bit longer and maybe tune it just a tad higher. The bass could also use little more power (maybe add seperate mid layer? Its up to you.

Nice work!
jf2010
quote:
Originally posted by Domesty
[QUOTE]Originally posted by Domesty
Well if you dont want comments about the content i won't, but the Mix seems OK.

I listened the second song whole, it was more interesting

The kick is still bothering me, You could just make it just a little bit tighter and i cant seem to hear is it properly cut ( can be a soundcloud distort). And the clap seems to be pretty mono and doesn't have space. You could make it's tail a little bit longer and maybe tune it just a tad higher. The bass could also use little more power (maybe add seperate mid layer? Its up to you.

Nice work!


Cheers for listening man appreciate it. Yeah would like to hear what you think of the track as a whole, mix and content.

Yeah the kick seems to drown out in the mix im having problems with that.. ill take alook at those points you said. Any thoughts on how the first one sounded?
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