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Inspirational Feeling
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| UKAR |
Hi all,
I am an up and coming producer and I have created this track that I would like feedback on if at all possible.
http://soundcloud.com/ukar/inspirational-feeling
I am attempting to improve my skills and would like to hear of any constructive feedback you may have.
Kind regards
Jamie |
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| Julz |
Hi,
Firstly your lead is WAY to load, and too much reverb on the lead and plucks.
Your kick has been drowned out. Barely hear it.
The melody needs work, and your structure needs alot of work.
Try low cutting at 200-250hz on all track except the bass and kick. Maybe shelf the lead abit on top, to make room for your hats.
Also, the melody comes in way to early, makes the track extremly boring to listen to. Its very sparkely.
Not to be mean, but its a very amature sounding song. That i wouldnt suggest "fixxing". Just use what you have learnt and make a new song.
I like your comment on SC haha "UK Alliance Records first release of 2012 comes together with this uplifting monster trance track that will simply send you into a frenzy"
Goodluck |
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| UKAR |
Hi Julz,
This is the kind of feedback that I needed to be honest with you which is why it has been removed from SC until further notice.
It is still in the very early stages of production and does need alot of work.
I am just playing with ideas at the moment but I take your feedback not as mean but as constructive.
Thanks again.
Jamie |
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