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WIP: Function T - We Can Fly (Original Mix)
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| function t |
Hey guys,
Here is the track in question:
The last time I posted about my remix of Above & Beyond - Sun & Moon, I received some great feedback from you guys that helped me take the track just a little beyond my initial idea.
Today, I'm looking to get your thoughts on my latest original work, entitled We Can Fly. This is a progressive/uplifting trance track that I produced for awhile and I've got it to a point where I'm almost done. Before I call it 'final,' I'd like to get some of your opinions on what I could improve or alter to give it that little bit extra.
Just for clarity, I haven't attempted any mastering (mostly because I suck at it) beyond making sure the peaks hit at 0db. I prefer to get a really solid mixdown that basically requires no mastering before I think about touching that master channel.
Anyways, if you've got any suggestions or feedback, please let me know! I love hearing from you guys!
THANK YOU!!!
-Function T- |
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| Domesty |
Don't know is it me, but the chorus feels like its laking off drive. It just doesnt catch me.
Technically nice stuff. Nothing wrong whit it. |
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| Raphie |
| it sounds like the DJ is constantly working the volume button. VERY fatiguing to my ears. WAY beyond functional sidechain |
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| function t |
| quote: | Originally posted by Domesty
Don't know is it me, but the chorus feels like its laking off drive. It just doesnt catch me.
Technically nice stuff. Nothing wrong whit it. |
Hey Domesty,
Thanks for the reply! And thanks for the honesty...I'm not terribly worried about pleasing everyone with every track. I am, however, most concerned with its technical quality...so thanks for the nod there!
Anyways, thanks for the listen and the good feedback!
-Function T- |
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| function t |
| quote: | Originally posted by Raphie
it sounds like the DJ is constantly working the volume button. VERY fatiguing to my ears. WAY beyond functional sidechain |
Hey Raphie,
Thanks for the reply! To be honest, the sidechained "skippy" feeling that I get from this track is one of my favorite attributes about it...but that doesn't mean that it has to be this way. Even if I like something a lot, I definitely don't want something to be a "chore" to listen to.
I'll look into playing around with a few of the elements to see if I can make it more pleasant on the ears.
THANKS FOR THE LISTEN!!!
-Function T- |
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