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[Progressive Trance] J W Henry - Orbit (Original Mix)
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| JWHenry |
Greetings, fellow members in trance.
Please, have a listen to my new piece. I've been working on it for a while now. It's been a long while since I last made trance, but all critique sure is welcome.
http://soundcloud.com/jwhenry/orbit
Thank You. |
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| JWHenry |
| Thoughts, anyone? |
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| Julz |
Hey, Not a fan of the kick, sounds like you layered a hihat panned abit right on it.
I like your arp plucks, sound very nice. Main lead sounds alittle static for me, maybe add some 1/16 notes?
Breakdown, the pad is comming in really open. I would automate the filter and open it up after 16bars or so. Piano is nice but sounds a little weird like its bandpassed. Dont like the Gated synth.
There is no impact after the breakdown, High pass that buildup so when its drops you get a nice drop.
Sounds like you have no volume automation at all, the song sounds alittle bit busy.
Hope this helps |
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| JWHenry |
| quote: | Originally posted by Julz
Hey, Not a fan of the kick, sounds like you layered a hihat panned abit right on it.
I like your arp plucks, sound very nice. Main lead sounds alittle static for me, maybe add some 1/16 notes?
Breakdown, the pad is comming in really open. I would automate the filter and open it up after 16bars or so. Piano is nice but sounds a little weird like its bandpassed. Dont like the Gated synth.
There is no impact after the breakdown, High pass that buildup so when its drops you get a nice drop.
Sounds like you have no volume automation at all, the song sounds alittle bit busy.
Hope this helps |
Thanks a lot for the comments. It really helps to get opinions from others, especially when I've listened to the track so much, it just makes me almost deaf to it. |
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| Hattie71 |
I think it is useful! |
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