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Jesse Fallis - Fantasy Land (Prog trance)
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| Beatflux |
| I like the first half a lot. I wish the 2nd half was a bit more developed. |
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| optik |
I really like this - it's missing something to elevate it to something releasable - a little bit of melody maybe, but the production is spot on - very well mastered
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| Julz |
Your lead is beautiful!!!
Really like this track, maybe just layer a brighter synth onto of that melody for the main bit. Your bass sounds like it has alot of noise in it also.
Goodjob! |
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| TranceLover007 |
Couple of things from my site lol:
1 - this main pad (I believe that you are using two or maybe three layers on it, is this true?), you could (for me, to add extra wow factor) improve this sound a bit, but don't ask me how and what kind lol as you will be a better person to choose one for your like, something that is a bit wider, thicker which you can open-up (with cutoff filter) every 4 bars to spice up this already sweet melo;
2 - I agree with previous statement about missing something catchy or releasable, some lead or even a arp which will add another/extra color or "wow" element to this track - only my 2 cents.
Cheers,
Darek |
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| Evolve140 |
| Thanks for checking guys. Yeah, 2nd half isn't too developed. Would probably be releasable if the energy from the first half was sustained a little better or developed. |
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| Nightshift |
| this is sick! nice work. definitely takes off to a fantasy land as the title claims. very pretty tuune :) |
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