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Tyson - Concrete Jungle :: Tech House/Tech Trance - Updated
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| TranceLover007 |
Cool start for something which could be a really massive track my friend. Energy and drive is already there with this nice collab between drums and bass line but something more need to happen in the future (progressively speaking) but I think that you are on good path with it so far, all the best man !!!
Darek |
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| Evolve140 |
Thanks man, jumped back on it. Pretty much done! Feedback appreciated :)
*wee little note update edit*
Got a bit of feedback from friends/producer buddies, seem to confirm that the kick is disappearing a bit, and the bassline may also need some work. Basically the kick not being strong enough. So I think I will try to work on the bassline, and choose a more prog sounding kick, but still feedback is welcome, would help to get a better sense of this issue. Over all though they really really liked it and I do to. A little work on said issue and should be ready to rock. |
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| Evolve140 |
Ears are seriously toast but got a lot of work done on this, probably about 7 hours total today. Really need to consider taking a new look at the arrangement.
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| Raphie |
the MOOG type basspad in the break doesn't really do it for me.
I perfectly get what you would like it to sound there, but it just isn't there yet. pattern is good, it's the patch that is too harsch.
Further great track, love the chordstabs, maybe a bit beefier kick? |
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| Richard Butler |
Decent track mate, but I agree, that moog bass pad in the first halve of the break is not really happening.
Like your perc work here. Maybe develop intro progression a little more, with some key big perc sounds.
The first part of the track wihout the beats is really quite an opening mate, excellent. |
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| Beatflux |
| quote: | Originally posted by Evolve140
Ears are seriously toast but got a lot of work done on this, probably about 7 hours total today. Really need to consider taking a new look at the arrangement.
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Arrangement starts to come apart at 2 minutes. Up until that point you were building up to something.
Good arrangements are either building up to something, or breaking down. It sounds like you didn't know where you want to go. |
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| EddieZilker |
| Love pretty much everything except what the other two gents have complained of. It just kind of spoils it. I could hear something, more like your beginning, there, but what you've got now loses traction and just kind of retards the quality. |
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| Evolve140 |
| Thanks guys, helpful. I should have just let it be, but instead kept trying to hammer away. I've had a nice break though so will come back to it with fresh ears, focusing on the good parts. |
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