Appreciate guys for your comments, I will respond to them when I get back from my vacation on Saturday.
Darek
TranceLover007
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Originally posted by Evolve140
Nice man, I dig it! Still waiting for the clap/snare though, any particular reason you're keeping it out? BTW, would you mind checking my latest? it's hi-guys.
Thank man, you got your clap/snare lol - still very basic but at least placement is there lol - appreciate.
quote:
Originally posted by Seandroid
I think the kick could cut through the mix a little better, maybe a bit more high end.
I do like the track a lot, but I think the track needs a hook melody. There's plenty of great melodies but they're sort of creating a slurry right now.
You need a focal point, or at least a climax that has one solid lead that takes presence in the mix that has a melody that's extremely memorable, and then I think you could get this one climbing up the charts.
I do rather wish it had a snare/clap, though :P
Yep, it is going this way, some more rounded structural ideas are already placed and I'm working on some additional melodic parts/elements to add to this track - I know how important this is for this typo of dance productions.
Also as I mention above, clap and snare are already part of this one lol - appreciate you time and comment man, thank you.
Darek
tehlord
Sounding good so far big D!
It might be worth trying the track about 4bpm slower, it's feeling a little rushed to me at the moment.
I'd also try and control the filter sweeps on the main stabs a little more, and perhaps open them up more slowly over a longer period of time to establish some progression.
All the musical elements are cool, but you've always been good at that :D
I wonder if you'll finish this one :rolleyes:
TranceLover007
quote:
Originally posted by LeftOuterJoin
Lovely texture - I wish I knew how to make (let alone put together!!) all those individual little parts!! (I'm still very much learning the ropes). For this reason, I shall refrain from expressing any thoughts about the technical/production quality as this would basically involve me throwing rocks where I'm actually better placed to be watering tomatoes (sorry if taht seems esoteric - maybe I'm having a 'Cantona Moment').
Anyway, to me, this is could still go those one of two ways I mentioned in my earlier comment... although, there's a lovely ambient foundation to this and I wonder whether introducing an epic dimension to this would be a kind of betrayal to the work you've done so far.
Nice work and I thinks it's fine without the snare/claps with what it is at the moment!!
Cheers
Alan
Every inputs count my friend small or big doesn't really matter as long as is some effort or intend, my appreciation will always be there - thank you Alan.
quote:
Originally posted by Targus28
Nice textures and layers, but i feel the track doesn't really go anywhere, i respect that it is a WIP thou.If you skip through the track in 8 parts everything's just repeating for the whole duration it feels.What is the purpose of the track? Is it something for just listening pleasure? Or a dance track? Or dont you know which direction you wish to take this in yet?
I hear your concerns man, I think you need to trust me a bit on this, hopefully you will be happy from my final creation when is done - appreciate man, all the best.
quote:
Originally posted by tehlord
Sounding good so far big D!
It might be worth trying the track about 4bpm slower, it's feeling a little rushed to me at the moment.
I'd also try and control the filter sweeps on the main stabs a little more, and perhaps open them up more slowly over a longer period of time to establish some progression.
All the musical elements are cool, but you've always been good at that :D
I wonder if you'll finish this one :rolleyes:
Hopefully this virus what I had for long time (inability to finish any track :D ) is completely cured and I shell impress you and finish this one for you G. (few more comment like this and my motivation will exceeds my production capability and that will be a huge problem ;)
All the best man, massive thanks for your time and comment - you are getting very popular on SC so I expect less and less support over here for me :stongue:
For some who may not notice - latest version (slightly rearrange) is up for listen - Thank you All for support !!!
Cheers,
Darek
TranceLover007
OK, guys I just get 60% done at this stage - some definite direction is establish for this track and rounded a bit more with melodic and structural adjustment.
At one point (around 1:54-2:08) when this morphing bass line kicks in (for 16 bars), I need some more work done, some more modulations with some smooth transition to this break which follow it - I hope that this Electro element will spice up my dance track enough :D
Catch me if you can now ;) - feel free to share any comments lol before is too late :stongue:
The arpeggio that comes at 0:44 - I didn't like the sounds, didn't fit the mood for me.
The melody after 1:12 is great! If you finish the track I want the MIDIs so I can remix it :D
Did not expect wobbling bass that comes at 1:55. It sounds very interesting.
3:50 is just awesome.
I really liked this track, the way it evolves is very creative. Big kudos to you!
TranceLover007
quote:
Originally posted by Sensuerea
I realy like those delayed FX sounds around 0:20.
The arpeggio that comes at 0:44 - I didn't like the sounds, didn't fit the mood for me.
The melody after 1:12 is great! If you finish the track I want the MIDIs so I can remix it :D
Did not expect wobbling bass that comes at 1:55. It sounds very interesting.
3:50 is just awesome.
I really liked this track, the way it evolves is very creative. Big kudos to you!
Thanks man, appreciate your honest opinion on this WIP ;)
When this track is ready I will send you MIDI part for it.
As far as this arp at 0:44 - for some reason I like it and it fits this overall melodic flow in this track, hmmm, we will see if I can make some adjustment to spice up this sound a bit more (only for you lol) - I'm really glad you enjoyed this WIP so far - excellent !!!!
Cheers,
Darek
theterran
Pretty sweet. Enjoyed this track, very clean and rich. Loved the first synth. Not a fan of the bass that comes in at 2:00, sounded awkward and out of place.
The finesse and detail in the percs and gated vocal samples is also quite nice! Looking forward to a finished track.
david.michael
Not a fan of the wobble synth, but I love the searing synth lead around the two and a half minutes mark.
Keep up the good work. :)
TranceLover007
quote:
Originally posted by theterran
Pretty sweet. Enjoyed this track, very clean and rich.
Great to hear that, as you could see there is seven different synths playing either as an arp, lead or pads and still cutting through freq nice and clean (I think) - appreciate !!!!
quote:
Originally posted by theterran
Not a fan of the bass that comes in at 2:00, sounded awkward and out of place.
Yep, I'm still not completely sold on this wobbly and morphing bass line, next few day will determinate faith of it lol - thank you!!!!
quote:
Originally posted by theterran
The finesse and detail in the percs and gated vocal samples is also quite nice!
You mean around 3:50 mark??? - if yes that this was my idea of spicing up this production with some more Electro twists - looks like it work out really nice - awesome !!!!
Cheers,
Darek
TranceLover007
quote:
Originally posted by david.michael
Not a fan of the wobble synth, but I love the searing synth lead around the two and a half minutes mark.
Keep up the good work. :)
I can hear you man, I'm still rethinking this bass idea and a special form to it to interact with the rest of melodic development at that particular moment - we will see in a few lol
And I assume you like this twist at around 3:50 mark?????
