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Misfortune - Kittens WIP - what to improve on?
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| Sensuerea |
So I'm working on a new track and it's coming along nicely I think. Please take some time, give it a listen and tell me how can I improve it.
Thanks!
Outro under construction. |
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| Sensuerea |
| Whoops, I just realized that link is broken. Fixed now! |
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| optik |
I love the intro, nice laid back lounge house.
I'd bring out your melodic elements more in the first section.
I'm not sure the section at 2:35 is is working musically for me - maybe it's a little over complex for the type of tune.
the whole thing has a nice feel.
your kick drum is pretty weak though
hope this helps |
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| Sensuerea |
Thank you for your opinion!
You're probably right about bringing more musical elements sooner. I will introduce full chord progression or extra instrument.
2:35 - do you mean that lead melody that's playing? I don't know, I really like it.
Do you think that kick needs more bottom end?
You bet it does, thanks! |
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| Evolve140 |
| Pretty nice dude. Nice hearing that bassline move around in the mix like that, dope. I think this sounds pretty good. |
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| Sensuerea |
| quote: | Originally posted by Evolve140
Pretty nice dude. Nice hearing that bassline move around in the mix like that, dope. I think this sounds pretty good. |
Thank you! |
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| TranceLover007 |
By now you probably now that I left you some comments on SC ;)
Really nice work man.
Darek |
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| Sensuerea |
| quote: | Originally posted by TranceLover007
By now you probably now that I left you some comments on SC ;)
Really nice work man.
Darek |
I do, mate. Thank you so much for them :D |
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