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possible OPtik WIP for TranceElevation - what do you think
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| optik |
the intro and outro need a bit of work, but the main theme is there - any comments about this one would be great, I think it might be a little oldschool
cheers for taking the time |
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| Mr. Le |
| I have to say that I love this track!!! I can feel the old school in it! The emotion in the breakdown was really entrancing! I would love to hear the finished track! I couldnt feel enough energy with the release but I do understand its a "WIP". Keep it up my friend, I feel good things for you in the near future! :) |
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| Sensuerea |
| I like the break, it sounds good. Percussion is a bit old school, I would EQ it a bit more so you can hear separate sounds - right now it blends too much. Overall I enjoyed it, good work. |
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| optik |
thanks so much guys -
i've got a finished version up here if you fancy a listen
T |
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| TranceLover007 |
Definitely can hear some dynamics and clarity of the sound improvement in this latest version - step in right direction.
Part from 2:10 to 4:28 is top draw may friend, I can admit that, very nice work - intro and after 4:28 (for me) need some more spicing up if you know what I mean, something to builds or prep you before this beautiful break and take you out of it, like chill you out slowly :D
Quality and catchy work man, you are almost there ;)
Cheers,
Darek |
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| optik |
| thanks man - made my evening =) |
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| Trancelover03591 |
| very nice. You seem like a very skilled producer. |
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| Peter Campbell |
Hey optik Im realy loving this, has a great chill vibe, perfect for the autumn weather here in oz.
yea like Darek said your are almost there. |
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| TranceElevation |
Sorry, just noticed this.
You already assembled it, but anyway I'd expose my view.
In the verse you should really use better the stereo image. Too centered, which in a way 'oppresses the beauty'. A bad contrast considering this big beautiful chord progression. It is a dreamy emotional piece, give us a feeling of space and freedom. The height is left ignored as well, a pity for such piece.
Break and build show negligence. Seems like you rushed on this.
Dedicate some more time. Is is the key moment. You got an amazing melody, treat her with the necessary attention and cure.
Also, I hear fruitless white noise. It takes more than what it gives.
That's it pretty much...a beautiful melody, overall a pleasant piece...but it needs more love to make it justice. ;)
I'm glad you're back at what you do best. |
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| DJ Robby Rox |
I agree I love the idea and feel this track can be made killer with the melody you got going.
Push the stereo field harder and add a sharper fm styled bass that breaths and sways left and right. =]
For the melody maybe add a few layers at a lower volume left and right. Thin the sounds out. Lower everything down. That perc loop sounds very familar btw. Trying to think of the name of the song I feel like I've heard it before lol. But the track is incredible. Phatten it up/clear it out, add a bit more groove, it will be perfect. |
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| optik |
cheers for the comments on this guys - really appreciate you taking the time to have a listen.
I may have a play with this one before it's final release and implement some of the things in here
If anyone fancies doing a remix, just let me know and you can have the stems etc.
Cheers
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| Beatflux |
I would like to hear it slowed down a bit.
The melody doesn't stand out as something original. |
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