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Trance Project - Work in Progress, would really appreciate some feedback :)
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| Targus28 |
Here's the link, if anyone could give me some feedback of what i have so far it would be greatly appreciated :)
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| Peter Campbell |
| Targus28 nicely done mate,,,,,mix is clean, cool filter sweeps |
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| optik |
sounding good -
nice production, good bass.
The arp that comes in at the start is a little random, it appears to repeat every 1.1 bars, which is a little distracting.
think the breakdown is a little dischordant - the last note in your sequence suddenly makes the major progression minor (until the bass comes in)
think you could lose the bit from 3:45 (where the bassline repeats) and just kick it back in - but that's the hard bit, delivering after the breakdown!
good WIP though |
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| Targus28 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Peter Campbell
Targus28 nicely done mate,,,,,mix is clean, cool filter sweeps |
Thank you :) |
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| Targus28 |
| quote: | Originally posted by optik
sounding good -
nice production, good bass.
The arp that comes in at the start is a little random, it appears to repeat every 1.1 bars, which is a little distracting.
think the breakdown is a little dischordant - the last note in your sequence suddenly makes the major progression minor (until the bass comes in)
think you could lose the bit from 3:45 (where the bassline repeats) and just kick it back in - but that's the hard bit, delivering after the breakdown!
good WIP though |
Thanks mate, i try hard to get a good kick and bass drives the track.
Yeh i need to work on fitting that arp in better, maybe lowering it or EQ'ing it a bit
Ive only worked on the start and breakdown, I'm going to be making the drop and the outro very soon |
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