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Looking for some feedback on a WIP trance track
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| Targus28 |
Thanks guys :)
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| Targus28 |
| Newer Version up :) |
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| TranceLover007 |
Will try later as looks like SC is down for maintenance lol
See you later.
Cheers,
Darek |
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| TranceLover007 |
I like what I'm hearing but for some reason (with this type of music/genre) I don't feel this dynamics and energy in it yet and have now idea why not. There is something missing in this track something which will create/add some nice riff to it and with out it you will really struggle to get some interest from different producers/people.
I thing this concept is really cool but you will need to find the way to get this dynamics up to next level - will try to listen a bit more later and see if I can point you to a specific place to get this issue correct/adjust.
Cheers man,
Darek |
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| optik |
I like it so far, but would love to hear what happens next, as most likely I'll be mixing over this bit!
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| Targus28 |
| quote: | Originally posted by TranceLover007
I like what I'm hearing but for some reason (with this type of music/genre) I don't feel this dynamics and energy in it yet and have now idea why not. There is something missing in this track something which will create/add some nice riff to it and with out it you will really struggle to get some interest from different producers/people.
I thing this concept is really cool but you will need to find the way to get this dynamics up to next level - will try to listen a bit more later and see if I can point you to a specific place to get this issue correct/adjust.
Cheers man,
Darek |
I know what you mean, i think some things are missing in the Freq range maybe.
Ive added some more percussion, a acid line, and a extra melody layer.Let me know your thoughts :). BTW, the drop is just a rough sketch right now.
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| TranceLover007 |
So good step in the right direction man.
Try to use a lot more FX (for my taste) will help you create this silky atmo around your base melody.
As far as this dynamics I was previously talking about, I think I know where this problem resides - try to add another layer of a bass line with slightly different characteristic (like mid low end) and very pattern on it, not like your regular bass line when you hitting 1/16 note - if you know what I mean ;) - this should give you a nice energy and emphasize this riff (which this track needs).
All the best man,
Darek |
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| davidleckenby |
| Hi There - just my 2c worth. I like the production and tightness. Sounds are good to me as well. I just think you need to work on a defining element(s) to take the listener somewhere different. Something that defines the track more as your style. Hope that's not too vague!.. |
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| Targus28 |
finished track :) |
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| Sensuerea |
Man, this turned out really fking great! I love the energetic feel of this one. Honestly, I can see it being released.
One thing though, is there some clipping at 1:35 (FX maybe?) or is it just me/SC? |
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