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toby shark - race (goes with kadence) - would love to know what you guys think
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| optik |
a bit old school, a bit emotional, I think this is my favorite track I've done - would love to know what you guys think
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| TranceLover007 |
I will take on this task and try to hel you to get this production to another level ;)
Melody and vocoder part is really cool and setup this bass for your track really nicely but the low end will need to have a bit better separation (in my opinion) as those layers (how many do you have/use) are overlap/overlay a bit to much for me.
Just because you base everything on this melo+vocoder elements, you will have to use a lot more FX and some cleaver transitions (or eve drums pattern changes will help) to spice up this track attractiveness and keep your listener hook up to it for longer then 2~3 min (only my opinion).
This is another one from you with cool and sweet potential but the faith of it is in your hands :D
Cheers,
Darek |
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| TranceElevation |
Toby, this is a very nice piece and project let me say.
If I could object on something, it would be sound selection.
Melody is on the mellow side, and imo you should accentuate more on this and dedicate the whole project to that spot.
I personally think a warmer sound selection would make more sense with this specific melody. Saws appear somehow counterproductive to the idea.
And honestly, male vox doesn't really work there...a female one with some delay and reverb to provide depth and colors... |
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| optik |
I'd love a femal voc on this matey - still trying to find a good one - any suggestions?
i've done a bit of a tech/prog remix for this track;
it's a bit strange, so it's in sharkseatpeople
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| Evolve140 |
| I'm a sucker for vocoder work. I like the trance breakdown, it's quite proper and not cheesy. The drop is cool, good stuff. This is really 2AM after-gig stuff, cruising around with your friends or after partying getting the good vibes started again for 2.0... I like it dude, good job. |
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| Mise |
| I really the vibe in this track, good work. Percs are great. I would probably chop and add more reverb and tap delay to the vocoder. |
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