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Trance + Electro + Disco = ?
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| POEKNEE |
Hey guys, just need some opinions on the production side of an original track I wrote. Can't really decide what genre to call it...I welcome any constructive criticism, advice, comments.
Here's the link to the track:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8oledc-TL8g
*cheers* - J Po |
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| dj_alfi |
i kinda liked the arpy hook. sounded slightly prog schooly. the offline bassline sounds 15 years old. the bass you have going in the 'verse' parts of the track is kinda cool, but really muddy.
alot going on in this track. some of it is cool, but not close to everything. |
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| POEKNEE |
Hey DJ ALfi, thank you for your reply :) I definitely hear what you're saying about the "mud" in the bass. Any suggestions or tips on how to deal with that problem? Anyways, your words are much appreciated, thanks again!
*cheers* - J Po |
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| Julz |
I actually like the bass, maybe work on the sound thou a little seinfield ish
Arp is cool but you dont lead anywhere really, drags on.
Could be a cool track, just cut the lows you dont need next time you post a demo :P |
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| dj_alfi |
| quote: | Originally posted by POEKNEE
Hey DJ ALfi, thank you for your reply :) I definitely hear what you're saying about the "mud" in the bass. Any suggestions or tips on how to deal with that problem? Anyways, your words are much appreciated, thanks again!
*cheers* - J Po |
If I remember correctly a reduction in 200hz field will help with mudiness on basslines. |
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