| optik |
the intro is quite hard - almost gabba. Even Tyas would have to play it at the end of a set!
Breakdown is OK - could be more uplifting - decent vocal if a little generic - who da singer/where did you get the vocal?
the bit after the vocal is good - it needs refinement; it's all a little full on - but I would take elements from the bit after the break and work them into the rather hard, boring intro section.
structure needs some work
track is much better after the break
hope this helps
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