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Untitled - Trance 2.0 / Trouse
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| Trancelover03591 |
Any suggestions would be nice.
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| Richard Butler |
| Lots of flair and ideas again, you just pour them out! I don't really have any input on this one. |
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| Evolve140 |
| Cool man! Get it played out! |
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| sicc |
| Awesome work, love the harmonic content on the second verse of the chorus. lots of energy. crispy mixdown. No real suggestions to be honest. great work as usual man. |
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| Deillon |
| Strings at @2.00 sound a tad too clean compared to your rising lead. |
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| Beatflux |
i like the 2 bar variation at the beginning
in the first drop you have 4 bar phrasing, one that last bar i would try to drop the percussion just for a greater syncopated effect maybe for just the first 2 4 bar phrases
the swung percussion doesn't work in the second drop. it sounds too loud.
first drop had a short synth part that helped to break up the action, 2nd drop is missing something like that
You're song needs a more defined b section, so something like a bass section or a melodic section to break up the pitch rising lead. maybe cutting a lot of the percussion out of the break will give your second drop more impact. Or you could go into something else for your 2nd drop and then return to the rising lead to finish the track. Or go into a dub drop after the 2nd drop, that would be ing epic...nobody would expect it.
I think everything up until the break is okay. did you write the track starting from the beginning? |
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| TranceElevation |
Is this serious or a joke...
Most pathetic thing I've heard this year :stongue: |
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| TranceElevation |
Is this serious or a joke...
Most pathetic thing I've heard this year :stongue:
Thank you for the good laugh btw.,, hahahhhahha |
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| Evolve140 |
| I'd love to hear something YOU'VE made. Go ahead. |
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| Trancelover03591 |
Well, I don't only make this style. I gave the title for a reaction. I honestly don't like this one that much either. I have four songs working right now, 'Mega' (which I am now working with a partner familiar to tranceaddict :) ), 'Event Horizon', 'Trance 2.0', and 'Why?':
The above track is my favorite. |
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| Trancelover03591 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Beatflux
i like the 2 bar variation at the beginning
in the first drop you have 4 bar phrasing, one that last bar i would try to drop the percussion just for a greater syncopated effect maybe for just the first 2 4 bar phrases
the swung percussion doesn't work in the second drop. it sounds too loud.
first drop had a short synth part that helped to break up the action, 2nd drop is missing something like that
You're song needs a more defined b section, so something like a bass section or a melodic section to break up the pitch rising lead. maybe cutting a lot of the percussion out of the break will give your second drop more impact. Or you could go into something else for your 2nd drop and then return to the rising lead to finish the track. Or go into a dub drop after the 2nd drop, that would be ing epic...nobody would expect it.
I think everything up until the break is okay. did you write the track starting from the beginning? |
Dude major lol on the avatar. I seriously thought you were EZ for a second.
I really appreciate the detailed feedback. I think I started at the beginning I don't remember. I probably am going to put this one on the shelf and finish my other 3 tracks. I don't really know how to make a dubstep climax. |
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| fuxzz |
| I think you should finish this, pretty good energy you had there. To bad I can't listen to it again :P |
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