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track - Toby Shark - Epika.. would love criticisms etc.
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| optik |
Sorry for not being around much since Ibiza - back properly now in spirit and body.
Would love to know what you guys think of this - does it sound OK on your systems etc.
Track goes from tech to a bit of a big trance breakdown then into a dirty bit of wobblemess then back to break and into unashamed melodic trance...
Any comments, criticisms and feedback would be appreciated. |
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| optik |
| yes - those are jets! |
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| ReclusNdangrmnt |
Production is great, sounds are slick, but it all seems very disjointed right now...You have quite a few sections that are diverse, and as such there is not really anything tying together.
Add some cohesiveness and a little more spice and it will be a great one! |
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| optik |
cheers man - really appreciate you taking the time to listen.
The plan is to do another couple of mixes - one with just the trance bits in (optik mix) and a more tech mix with the dubstep bits but none of the building choir stuff. I'll post them here when i'm done with them tomorrow.
glad to hear it sounds OK on your system too!
Thanks
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| Richard Butler |
| That break pays hommage to your epic Ibiza trip perhaps, and it's really stunning. I'll be honest Toby and say I'm as yet a bit uncertain about the intro and drop. |
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| ReclusNdangrmnt |
| I'd like to hear the finished mixes on their own for sure...Might even have some label prospects! |
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| sicc |
Crisssspy clean mix dude. very smooth. Punchy. sexy.
I really enjoyed the intro and the fall into the brakedown, felt the energy, when the wobbles dropped in, it seemed like it kept the energy, but then around 3.34 the melodic plucks just kind of jumped in, and it didnt really transition in, just kind of came in out of no where and out of place. Same thing happens towards the end, around 5.50something.
Other then the dis-connected transitions, REALY enjoyed this, awesome breakdown. Absolutly love the kick, could do well with a longer release time on it though.
Looking forward to hearing this with the gaps bridged! |
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| optik |
Thanks for all the comments guys,
I'm going to work a bit on the transitions and polish the bits suggested. trance mix is coming along nicely I think too.
I really appreciate you all taking the time - the comments are really useful and mean a lot to me!
cheers |
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| optik |
| trance mix is almost done - no dubstep in this one - I've made a new topic =) |
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