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new track (full) pompom crab- taste in robots
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| moozngooz |
please tell me what u think
tnx |
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| moozngooz |
| please tell me what do u think on the sound\melody and so :) |
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| Beatflux |
| i am liking the melody |
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| TGS |
I think if you could make this feel a little less distant (bring some of the percussion more up front in the mix) then it could really benefit. I think you could change a lot on the drums you used. When it builds to the part around 4:24 or so, I felt like that could have hit a lot harder because the song builds up a lot of emotion at that point. Your kicks definitely need some more low end in them.
Also, the envelope of the patch that comes in at around 1:15 could stand to be shortened just a little bit. That patch could also use some EQing because it muddies up an otherwise very clean mix. Having a hard time telling if it just the patch or if you have a filter sweep on it, too. But the volume swells and the movement of that bass line seem to be clasing with one another. |
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| prema_van_smuuf |
Also, don't publish tracks that are supposed for critical listening onto youtube, as you don't always know what audio quality it will end up with :)
And I like the feeling; those main sine/tribal stereo melody thingies are, in my opinion, too loud against the rest of the mix. the kick doesn't have to be necessarily louder/with more low's, IMHO, but everything else should be - what you have there is not a really balanced mix .
But then again - I can't say it for sure, because I don't really know, what youtube encoding did with it.. :) |
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| moozngooz |
tnx allot for the advises.:)
maybe in soundcloud it will sound better:) |
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| meriter |
| this has a nice spring after a thunderstorm vibe to it, really enjoy it up until the melody changes |
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