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My latest WIP, Almost Done, Wanting Last Bits of Feedback
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| MIKE333ACE |
This is my latest version of my track "Netherworld". It's almost complete, so I'm just looking for the last bit of feedback before I call it done.
If there's any minor details that you think I should change, let me know.
Thanks, and enjoy :)
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| Evolve140 |
Mike, are you making sure to give others feedback? I see you pretty actively posting material but have yet to read any of your own words on other tracks.
edit: But I am glad you are posting. Keep it up. |
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| MIKE333ACE |
| quote: | Originally posted by Evolve140
Mike, are you making sure to give others feedback? I see you pretty actively posting material but have yet to read any of your own words on other tracks.
edit: But I am glad you are posting. Keep it up. |
Well I know this will sound stupid, but its because of the lack of internet I get. the only time I can freely use the internet is at school, but I'm obviously busy doing school work then.
Then at home, I get extremely limited data that I pay for. Unfortunately seeing that I have strict-ass parents, I cant have internet supplied for me cos I'll supposedly use it all up in one day.
And anyway, as you can see, I have had this song up on Soundcloud for a week, but only found the time to post it yesterday.
I know this sounds stupid, but unfortunately, this is how it is. |
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| Evolve140 |
| Don't worry about it man, good of you to take the time to explain. This was a very acute observation and not really a pervasive theme I noticed. Take advantage of this forum. I did when I started at 17. 25 next month. |
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| MIKE333ACE |
| quote: | Originally posted by Evolve140
Don't worry about it man, good of you to take the time to explain. This was a very acute observation and not really a pervasive theme I noticed. Take advantage of this forum. I did when I started at 17. 25 next month. |
Thats fine, and yeah, I do as much as I can. I do like to check out other music from fellow producers at a similar level to me. It helps me get a good comparison, rather than just comparing my sounds to the pro's. |
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| TranceLover007 |
For a 15 years old producer - it is really impressive track, I can say, got my attention and keep me wanted to listen to the end which is really good thing my young friend.
Few things here and there and could be really nice track to show around.
One of the few thing would be at 5:42 area - I would add another pluck/lead to play some different notes/melody.
Another one suggestion will be at 6:10 min - piano sound is not cutting through how suppose to and takes away a lot of character of this track in that particular moment ;)
Overall nice and solid work which you should/could be really proud of :toocool:
Cheers,
Darek |
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| MIKE333ACE |
| quote: | Originally posted by TranceLover007
For a 15 years old producer - it is really impressive track, I can say, got my attention and keep me wanted to listen to the end which is really good think my young friend.
Few things here and there and could be really nice track to show around.
One of the few thing would be at 5:42 area - I would add another pluck/lead to play some different notes/melody.
Another one suggestion will be at 6:10 min - piano sound is not cutting through how suppose to and takes a lot of character of this track in that particular moment ;)
Overall nice and solid work which you should/could be really proud of :toocool:
Cheers,
Darek |
Thanks for this, this is the kind of feedback that I was looking for. Nice and precise. Really appreciate it, Cheers :) |
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| TranceLover007 |
| quote: | Originally posted by MIKE333ACE
Thanks for this, this is the kind of feedback that I was looking for. Nice and precise. Really appreciate it, Cheers :) |
You welcome my young friend and keep producing as you have what you need to have in order to success !!!
Cheers,
Darek |
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| MIKE333ACE |
| quote: | Originally posted by TranceLover007
You welcome my young friend and keep producing as you have what you need to have in order to success !!!
Cheers,
Darek |
Will do, thanks :D |
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