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Edward Maya - Stereo Love (Falken Remix) [VOCAL TRANCE]
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| Falken_za |
My near finished remix of Edward Maya's greatest work of art.
Crit and abuse welcomed :)
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| Falken_za |
| I guess it sucks. Will try harder. |
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| EddieZilker |
| I don't think it sucks. The filter-sweep on the kick, where you're opening the low pass to reveal its kiss, is a little atypical. I didn't feel like that related to the song but it doesn't kill it, either. Apart from that, I'm not really hung up on any other details and really enjoyed listening to it. It's definitely cheesy but it's a good kind of cheesy, and I thought it was well-executed. |
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| Falken_za |
Thank you very much for your feedback, brother!
I spent a few hours addressing the problems you pointed out and so far it is sounding much better. Also did a major overhaul on the climax and cooldown. Will upload as soon as I'm home from work. |
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| nusphere |
| I'm probably not the best person to critique this track as I don't really like vocal trance, but I'm listening so I'll write. I think there are nice synth elements in the track. The tempo is too hurried for the vocal, and the timestretching seems to have distorted the vocal in places. The breakbeat type pattern in the beginning sounds too cluttered to me. I had a quick listen to the original, which has an accordion playing as a central feature, would be good for you to use that element in some way. |
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| TheFrown |
| Sounds good to me! I feel like the drop has potential to hit a lot harder. I say come in with just instrumental then bring the vocal back after a few bars. |
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| Falken_za |
Sorry about the delay, guys. Been working at this track and not ready to upload quite yet. Thank you to everybody for the constructive crit, due to you guys it is sounding a lot better. so far I have reworked the climax completely after hearing what eddiezilker had to say. I'm now going to slow it down a tad, maybe 130 or 135bpm. I think I'm also gonna go with TheFrown's advice. I see a good result coming from that.
I really don't want to put the accordion in this remix, I dunno, maybe I'm being stupid, but my aim here is a unique remix. Thanks for the input, though.
Will upload results soon :)
Again, thanks for the crit, it is always appreciated :) |
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| Falken_za |
Okay, here it is.
Hope you like it. |
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| EddieZilker |
| Nailed it! Thanks for making this downloadable. I really feel like you addressed my criticism concerning the kick, too. Seriously, nice job. |
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