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nusphere - Restless-Desire (Hard Trance/Hard House)
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nusphere
Hey guys, Here's a resent HardTrance/House track that I've put together. I'm looking for constructive criticism, all comments welcome, cheers :D

Restless Desire by nusphere

http://soundcloud.com/nusphere/restless-desire
EddieZilker
1. On the sound-cloud page your song is posted, click the share button.

2. Copy the text from the widget code box.

3. Paste it, here.

4. Post.
nusphere
Ah thanx EddieZilker :D
TranceLover007
quote:
Originally posted by nusphere
Ah thanx EddieZilker :D


But next time please deselect "Use the HTML5 widget" option on the bottom of the screen as we are losing volume level control ;)

Cheers,

Darek
EddieZilker
quote:
Originally posted by TranceLover007
But next time please deselect "Use the HTML5 widget" option on the bottom of the screen as we are losing volume level control ;)

Cheers,

Darek


I did not know this. Thanks, man!
TranceLover007
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Originally posted by EddieZilker
I did not know this. Thanks, man!


Yeh, some of track are so freaking loud that blast my ears right from the beginning lol and I can't adjust this volume level because of this new HTML5 widget :D

Cheers,

Darek
nusphere
quote:
Originally posted by TranceLover007
But next time please deselect "Use the HTML5 widget" option on the bottom of the screen as we are losing volume level control ;)
Darek


Ah okay Darek!
TranceLover007
Let's start with this: I do believe that there is definitely something to work from or with :D

Not a fun of your kick and intro (up to 1:50) but after that I kind of like it. Need some spicing-up and tweaking but your basic melody is establish already and can be explore/develop into something really interesting and cool - like what I'm hearing so far - remember this is only my $0.02.

Darek
nusphere
quote:
Originally posted by TranceLover007
Let's start with this: I do believe that there is definitely something to work from or with :D

Not a fun of your kick and intro (up to 1:50) but after that I kind of like it. Need some spicing-up and tweaking but your basic melody is establish already and can be explore/develop into something really interesting and cool - like what I'm hearing so far - remember this is only my $0.02.

Darek


Hey thanks for chipping in your $0.02 Darek! What is it about the kick you don't like? Is it too distorted do you think?
EddieZilker
There's a bassy sound that shows up, right behind the kick, I thought could be pulled down, quite a bit (don't know if that's what TL007 noticed or not). Apart from that, however, I think this is an ace tune. Really love how the back-ground builds throughout various parts and the breakdown was handled very well. Keep banging on it but I think it's almost done.

nusphere
quote:
Originally posted by EddieZilker
There's a bassy sound that shows up, right behind the kick, I thought could be pulled down, quite a bit (don't know if that's what TL007 noticed or not). Apart from that, however, I think this is an ace tune. Really love how the back-ground builds throughout various parts and the breakdown was handled very well. Keep banging on it but I think it's almost done.


After the first 16 seconds or so the sub-bass is introduced, perhaps it should not appear as a separate element but just support the rest of the bass when that is introduced!? Thanks for your input though EddieZilker much appreciated :D
TranceLover007
quote:
Originally posted by EddieZilker
There's a bassy sound that shows up, right behind the kick, I thought could be pulled down, quite a bit (don't know if that's what TL007 noticed or not). Apart from that, however, I think this is an ace tune. Really love how the back-ground builds throughout various parts and the breakdown was handled very well. Keep banging on it but I think it's almost done.


This is quite right observation Eddie, sound like kick draw too much of space in your freq + you maybe close to clipping on master volume.

The rest is really cool and worth of finishing in my opinion - nice so far man.

Darek
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