This sound really promising man, at least for now - what you are missing is this massive lead with long tail plying some sweet and catchy melody around 2 min mark - can't wait for more on this lol
Cheers man,
Darek
Trancelover03591
Do you mean the new synth you can hear coming in at the very end of the track that has a lot of reverb along with the crash? Or something different?
You do a great job with a lot of synths in your songs and I have a difficult time adding elements that sound good together, so I appreciate the advice.
TranceLover007
Completely new lead need to be introduce in around 1:30 mark (my opinion)
Check this track and time 2:23 - this is this kind of sound I was talking about.
Very pretty chord progression. I wish the percussion elaborated more, though.
Evolve140
Yeah, like he said... the percussion is kind of weak. Listening to it on some floor mount Polk speakers and a Denon amp and it sounds good, but to really make this stand out the drums need to play a bigger role. Sounds nearly like ASOT or TATW.
tehlord
I think you might need to tame the tail of the kick a bit as it's coming through the mix a little too much.
Also, that main stab is too forward in the mix, just a bit though. I'd look at reducing the amp release as you open the filters up and wetting it up with a bit of delay and/or reverb as well. I think it needs more ducking too.
Richard Butler
Good work so far - I agree on the filter opening - it looses a little energy there.
I have a lead melody and sound in my head for this.
I really love the kick choice.
