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Those We Love (WIP)
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| Evolve140 |
Made this a late night last night after spending Thanksgiving with my family. |
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| Evolve140 |
| Thanks for checking guys. Any thoughts about what it could be missing or areas for improvement? I need to get some FX in there but I like the arrangement. |
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| Rodri Santos |
i like it, the sound design the mix all in sum. But it's a bit boring needs some variations, some percussion something to justify the length of the track.
I don't know what style is this, very personal for sure does not sound like anything released on the beatport trance/prog house chart. |
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| Evolve140 |
| Cool. I guess I tend to get enveloped in the 8 bar notion. I have a lot of patience musically and I like my stuff to be well developed and articulate. I could change it, but I kind of like it the way it is. Long and progressive. What I want to know is it things are doing their job, and if I need more elements. What I need to do is go back and finish this thing. The best way for me to do that is take a break and come back. |
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| Rodri Santos |
well at 3:15 you need a pad or something what you are doing esentially is repeating 1st section backwards from simpler to more crowded. Commercial progressive house formula of Intro-Chorus-Breakdown-Chorus-Outro works but on this kind of stuff that has a different audience... don't think so.
It's a pity because sometimes i feel the same with my own productions it has 80-90% to be a hit or at least a remarcable track but because of this small details it never gets to the next step. |
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| TranceLover007 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Rodri Santos
i like it, the sound design the mix all in sum. But it's a bit boring needs some variations, some percussion something to justify the length of the track. |
This pretty much sum-up my comment for this WIP so far - indeed nice idea/concept but need to be expended a bit more to be more attractive.
Nice to see you kicking and screaming again man lol --> as long as you focus on something, you can really do what you want to do and do it well !!!
Cheers,
Darek |
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| Evolve140 |
| The issue with me is I don't really have a lot of time to work on tracks. Setting and scene are really important for me. I only worked on this track for about 3 hours. I'm kind of satisfied that it's semi-solid right now. Does seem like the drums start to drag quite a bit. By the way, thanks for the compliment. If I can find a good time to set my self on this task then it should come out well. At the moment I'm in the process of getting 2 tracks mastered for an EP. Yes, finished tracks! Figure it should help me get the ball rolling. My focus needs to shift to finishing tracks. I feel like eventually I could get really good at that. |
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