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This is my song 'Reverie'. I would love if you guys gave a listen!
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| CocaineAudio |
| Intro is good.. I don't like how that bass arp comes in.. It's like the first sound is modern then you come in with that vintage bass sound.. I would work on your drum work.. it sounds kind of amateurish.. that clap and kick sounds old.. try layering your drums.. I would have a white noise that buildsup to where your piano comes in.. but besides that track is good... But anyway checkout my new progressive house track > http://www.tranceaddict.com/forums/...2&forumid=74&s= it's pretty sick |
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| ediket1 |
| quote: | Originally posted by CocaineAudio
Intro is good.. I don't like how that bass arp comes in.. It's like the first sound is modern then you come in with that vintage bass sound.. I would work on your drum work.. it sounds kind of amateurish.. that clap and kick sounds old.. try layering your drums.. I would have a white noise that buildsup to where your piano comes in.. but besides that track is good... But anyway checkout my new progressive house track > http://www.tranceaddict.com/forums/...2&forumid=74&s= it's pretty sick |
Thanks for the feedback! Your track is pretty good, it builds up nicely and the vocals fit well. Good job! |
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| CocaineAudio |
| quote: | Originally posted by ediket1
Thanks for the feedback! Your track is pretty good, it builds up nicely and the vocals fit well. Good job! |
Thanks bro |
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| TranceLover007 |
Can you please embed your track code in here - may help you get more comments ;)
Cheers mate,
Darek |
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