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Dogwig FREE Track of the week *Don't hit the Church Bus*
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| DogwigMusic |
I'm going to start doing a free weekly track if I can keep up with it. (: The track will be deleted when the next track is uploaded to make room for the next track. If you like it, let everyone know about Dogwig! Thanks for checking it out! I <3 everyone who listens!
Download "Don't Hit the Church Bus!"
https://soundcloud.com/#backbodydro...church-bus-free |
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| DogwigMusic |
| Forgot to introduce myself though, I am Weston and I reside in West Virginia. I enjoy dance music, guitar, and singing. Thanks :D |
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| DogwigMusic |
| Looking for some feedback if anyone cares to share? |
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| Anakratis |
First of all, use a correct post title.
xxxxxxx - xxxx xxxxx [genre, mix, etc]
Second, your link doesn't work. Always double check everything before posting. Remove the "s" from https and the "#" from your artist name.
Ok, now. To be honest, the track was....eh. The patch work / sounds were below par - sounds like they were made extremely basic. The track has absolutely no bass whatsoever. I was expecting some sub bass to come in later in the track. The melody is also quite mediocre and cliche.
I would add a deep sub bass, and create some variations in the drums and percs, as they get too repetitive. I would also change the patches on the synths you used as they are basic, and that should be enough to get it going. Good luck!
If you're just starting out, welcome to the EDM community :) |
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| DogwigMusic |
| quote: | Originally posted by Anakratis
First of all, use a correct post title.
xxxxxxx - xxxx xxxxx [genre, mix, etc]
Second, your link doesn't work. Always double check everything before posting. Remove the "s" from https and the "#" from your artist name.
Ok, now. To be honest, the track was....eh. The patch work / sounds were below par - sounds like they were made extremely basic. The track has absolutely no bass whatsoever. I was expecting some sub bass to come in later in the track. The melody is also quite mediocre and cliche.
I would add a deep sub bass, and create some variations in the drums and percs, as they get too repetitive. I would also change the patches on the synths you used as they are basic, and that should be enough to get it going. Good luck!
If you're just starting out, welcome to the EDM community :) |
Thank you very much man! The patches are extremely basic and very normal. Very little changes were made to the original wave to get it where it is. Ill work on it! |
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| Anakratis |
| quote: | Originally posted by DogwigMusic
Thank you very much man! The patches are extremely basic and very normal. Very little changes were made to the original wave to get it where it is. Ill work on it! |
No worries, best of luck! And as always if you need any help always ask here :)
Also apologies for the "rude awakening" - just trying to get things organized! |
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