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new track, comments appreciated and valued - trance 138bpm
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| optik |
new version:
new track I'm finally working on - when it's finished I'm going to release it will all sales going to Macmillan cancer support. You'll probably work out the story from the title and this.
if anyone has comments, they would be appreciated as I really want to get this one right - it's pretty much euphoric trance and a bit oldschool, but it has the emotion that i want from the original piano bit that i wrote about 10 years ago!
also we're looking for remixes if you fancy it, just send me an email
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| Sexomatic |
| not my style but a really good track, i like the piano.. |
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| optik |
cheers sexomatic
=)
going to be working on the intro and outro, and adding a bit of interest in the main sections as it's a bit repetative |
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| Richard Butler |
| quote: | Originally posted by optik
new track I'm finally working on - when it's finished I'm going to release it will all sales going to Macmillan cancer support. You'll probably work out the story from the title and this.
if anyone has comments, they would be appreciated as I really want to get this one right - it's pretty much euphoric trance and a bit oldschool, but it has the emotion that i want from the original piano bit that i wrote about 10 years ago!
also we're looking for remixes if you fancy it, just send me an email
t |
terrific main parts, everything I'd want from hands in the air.
Intro is not at all right yet but I suspect you know this.
Should be a good track for you Toby. |
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| optik |
Cheers Rich!!
intro and outro need work - they're the bits I don't like working on too ;) |
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| optik |
Finally did more work to this - life's been a bit of a nightmare, but summer is here so I'd better just get on with it ;)
any comments appreciated, although I recognise I haven't been the most active of participants here..
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| fri3ndly |
| I really like this but I just think the drop needs more of a build up and some punch when it kicks in as it sounds a little weak to me |
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| optik |
cheers for taking the time to listen fri3ndly - I think you're right, will have a little tweak of those sections
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| TranceLover007 |
| quote: | Originally posted by optik
Finally did more work to this - life's been a bit of a nightmare, but summer is here so I'd better just get on with it ;)
any comments appreciated, although I recognise I haven't been the most active of participants here..
T |
Has some really nice feel to it T. - like where you taking this track man - improve drop in 1:09 (more prep tension) and also some drop out of your break will create more needed dynamics in your track - the rest sound sweet and driving already.
Cheers,
Darek |
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| mistermerlin |
| gay and boooooring |
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| optik |
| quote: | Originally posted by mistermerlin
gay and boooooring |
difficult top respond to that isn't it, but thanks for having a listen - I feel pleasure that I've at least taken up 6 minutes of your straight and interesting life ;) |
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| Seven Doxian |
| i liked it ...nice tight kick and bass lead in and a great groove ...maybe some interesting melodies to liven up the beginning like a suttle arp or something to break up the monotony also maybe try to sculpt the lead chords into more of a hook and i think it be sweet....sorry to hear about your sister...hope everything works out for her...nice production skills ! |
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