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| Lightworks |
Heyz all,
I'm currently making some new tracks (as well as From Beyond, if anyone heard that preview sample from that tune), and this is a sample from one I'm thinking of starting on. I'd just like to know if it's worth a try, if it's a good melody ;)
Download (right click, save as) HERE
As cheesy as it might be, I'm thinking of writing this track for my girlie... Because she's studying in another town at the moment and I can only see her from friday till sunday :(
Byez ;)
Wim |
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| John |
this sounds nice wim!
nice melody a good sound used for it:)
i dont know if i dig the bassline..maybe it should be a bit lower or something i dont know really..hard to explain;) |
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| Lightworks |
| thx for the comments John. I know about the bassline at this stage, it's a bit flat... But I will change that for sure ;) |
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| tor8024 |
nice one, wim, it's not cheesy at all.
i'm sure your gf will love it!
just wondering, have u ever thought of producing a down-tempo track? i think you have the ability to write some very emotional electronica pieces. some of the string sections u have in your tracks are absolutely mesmerising (listening to field of space 2002 now :)). wim on the piano, i'm curious to see how that would sound... ;) |
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| mantisnl |
hey wim ;)
i dunnow but i don`t like this one that much :(
it just sounds not as professional as ur other tracks and remixes..
well.. i think it`s just me then:rolleyes:
succes with it ;)
grtz,
mantis |
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| Endre |
this is nice, but some more percussions would do it ;)
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| delphini blue |
Very very nice string breakdown in this one wim!
well impressed, your girl friend will love it im sure. as said above i think this track would work better as a chilled number, may also be more special that way.
good luck with it |
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| dbl |
| sounds really nice wim |
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| Disgustipation |
This sounds damn good to me..... The breakdown is a little slow for me, and a bit sudden. But the rest is quite nice. I like the build up out of the break a lot.
Eddie |
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| Lightworks |
mantis : well... this is something i wrote in about 15 mins, so it's not mastered or looked at the ffects at all... just wanted to know about the melody for my girlie hehe. so if people like that, i could get started on this one ;)
delphini : i might do a down tempo track, but my girlie likes the beats in trance... so ;)
to you and the others : thx for commenting!
cheers,
Wim |
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| DC- |
| Sounds good technically, but IMO it's very boring, the melody is too generic. |
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| Lightworks |
| quote: | Originally posted by DC-
Sounds good technically, but IMO it's very boring, the melody is too generic. |
ok... thx dc- ;) |
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