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My progressive trance track with a singer from the NYC
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| Constantin_P |
Hi, guys!
I present to your attention my new track.
It was recorded with a cute girl Kim Hawkins.
Let's start listening!
Leave some feedback :tongue2
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| optik |
I like the first drop at 1 min - but it's not as polished as what you might find on beatport, maybe process each sound separately?
This is an interesting track - deserves a listen.
It's almost right, the piano chords could be magical, but at the moment they aren't. not quite, the progression is right in parts but wron in others.
the main melody is out of place - avicii/hardwell, why bother?, do something more innovative 3:20 onwards is OK but doesn't deliver on the promise of the interesting vocal.
This track is trouse, it only needs to be 4 mins or so.
I like the repeat at 4:20
almost there. but a lot to change to make it playable I think; it has all the elements, just not in the right order and maybe some things need to be edited out altogether |
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| Constantin_P |
| quote: | Originally posted by optik
I like the first drop at 1 min - but it's not as polished as what you might find on beatport, maybe process each sound separately?
This is an interesting track - deserves a listen.
It's almost right, the piano chords could be magical, but at the moment they aren't. not quite, the progression is right in parts but wron in others.
the main melody is out of place - avicii/hardwell, why bother?, do something more innovative 3:20 onwards is OK but doesn't deliver on the promise of the interesting vocal.
This track is trouse, it only needs to be 4 mins or so.
I like the repeat at 4:20
almost there. but a lot to change to make it playable I think; it has all the elements, just not in the right order and maybe some things need to be edited out altogether |
Thank you dude!
I just try to practice. And to make Avicii/Hardwell's sound is a getting a great experience for me)) |
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