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Little track I did, comment/critic!
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| dapz |
Fire away! I just want to get better so any comment is welcome! |
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| optik |
makes it easier
nice percs, salty little loops, good production
try dropping the bass an octave at 2:30 for a bit more impact
it's missing something to really elevate the track - there is a lack of drama, dynamic light/shade - the bit at 4:30 tries, but is confused I think
it's a bit over compressed for this style, it shouldn't be pushing 0 all the time, think about it on vinyl.
5:09 - it's doing too much. get rid of the big phased sound and the track will be better
hope this helps
T |
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| dapz |
| thank you very much man! I see what you mean, I'll try some stuff around ! |
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