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Mono !!!! in waiting for your opinion....cheers!!!
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| optik |
oh I like the start
not sure the hats at 1 work, they aren't smooth enough and dont quite fit the track.
at 1:30, try filtering those string pad things in, you can use the drama later.
I'm hoping there is something amazing coming after 2:22...
good.
it's close with the sound - not quite right - I would use a distorted rhodes electric piano under it (or for it)
takes too long this bit.. bored at 3:30.. structure.
3:59, not quite - why not give us our bassdrum there? bang bang bang bang --- not the fading one, but a side chainer - really deep and hard.
after such a good start the end is dull.. shame, this one could be a blinder if you deal with it right and actually visualise it in a club.
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| Jono88 |
| quote: | Originally posted by optik
oh I like the start
not sure the hats at 1 work, they aren't smooth enough and dont quite fit the track.
at 1:30, try filtering those string pad things in, you can use the drama later.
I'm hoping there is something amazing coming after 2:22...
good.
it's close with the sound - not quite right - I would use a distorted rhodes electric piano under it (or for it)
takes too long this bit.. bored at 3:30.. structure.
3:59, not quite - why not give us our bassdrum there? bang bang bang bang --- not the fading one, but a side chainer - really deep and hard.
after such a good start the end is dull.. shame, this one could be a blinder if you deal with it right and actually visualise it in a club.
tks for your opinion!!!
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