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Ursa - Original mix (Industrial uplifting trance, 140bpm)
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| mario447 |
Here is my second original track..
Any support is appreciated!
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| Artimes |
The track is ok. A bit repetitive, and some harmony's seems to be off. Aspecially in the breakdown, where the bassline seems to conflict with the rest of the melody. Also, you got no bass in the track. Like you have cut everything below 150Hz on the master channel or something.
Some more bass to the kick and bassline will give it more drive.
Fix that, and it will sound much better right away :) |
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| mario447 |
mmm I have 2bass line throughout the whole track except for the first part of breakdown, maybe bad mixing!
thanks for the comments..I'll keep on making more and more, cheers =) |
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