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Uplifting Trance - please comment
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| Lightworks |
Hey all ;)
A while after upping a preview of this track, I finished it this weekend. I don't know if this is going to be the final mix of the track, so please let me know what to improve or let be ;)
download here :
lightworks - i miss you [original mix]
cheers ;)
Wim/LW |
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| Boy trance |
Yo yo Wim,
Another tune by Lightworks to add to the collection! Hmm, alright well this tune is really good, but not great.. kinda mediocre, your average good trance if you will... the quality is great (but then again you've never lacked in that department), but melody wise it isnt phenomenal, but still would keep me moving if I heard it in a club ;)
but you know what, the more i listen to it the catchier it becomes... I especially like your bassline, not necessarily the synth or sound as much as the pattern ;) um, i dunno what esle to comment on, wish I could help you in any improvements but aside from melody the tune is almost flawless in my opinion. Keep it up wim, and remeber to spend as much time as you can with each tune! ;)
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| Endre |
have listened now and i´ve heard better stuff from you, the melody seems not to get that "ultra" feel from the notes, hard to discribe.
but otherwise its very good mate :) i like it alot!
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| mckey_21 |
| very cool track m8 ;) |
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| Lightworks |
thx for commenting people ;)
boy trance : i did spend my precious time on this one... releasing a tune every now and then doesn't necessarily mean that I think... look at Airbase ;)
cheers,
Wim/LW |
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| mantisnl |
hey wim:D
nice track!
tho i have 2 agree.. the melody is a bit simple.. ur tracks begin 2 sound a bit the same.. think of something much different.. and with some original sounds
well it sounds very profesional! u really gotta send some of ur stuff 2 labels;)
keep it up!
grtz,
DJ Mantis
ps. werk maar rustig door aan de melodie.. t heeft geen haast want ik heb ut ook errug druk:p |
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| Lightworks |
hey thx for the comments luuk/mantis!
well i hit the trance standard button with this one again i suppose... but what would the comments be when ferry himself made such a tune i sometimes wonder... ligaya was fairly standard as well imho... and even airbase tends to sound a bit the same as well i feel... so i thought why not ;)
expect a new album with some different sounds soon... thoe are more darker and differently structured tracks i made over the last months (aug and sept).
cheers ;)
Wim |
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| Lightworks |
| anyone else wanna comment? i'm still wanting to make it sound better... |
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| -AbsurD- |
cheesy bassline bro....and also its hitting kinda to the right speaker all the time
the melody is pretty good at the beginnin', but it looses the power when it goes further.
also ...strings sound awesome as hell, but I would recommend u to make them softer... they kinda dark at this stage...
well... the track is pretty good, actually... nice work... reminds me of Rank 1 sometimes...
this is one of my fav trax in ur collection... i like it, it brings up the memories, from the days when I was into this kind of cheesy-ish trance... its good...
I work with a few djs/producers, and currently into music production also, after 3 years of djein', and years and years of electronic music experience... (yeah, i started listenin to this music, when Ace Of Base, and Dr. Alban just released their first albums, hehe... ) oh well... im not a very experienced producer yet, but a coupla of my trax went around a few clubs. So... what I wanna say is, dude... u gotta move to something more progressive, and new... uplifting trance is getting old... it is old, actually....
I didnt try to offense anyone, if I did... I appologize...
Great work, Lightworks .... quality work... =) |
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| quddha |
| Make whatever music you feel like making, just be true to yourself... |
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| FuzzyGreen |
| Good production quality, but I don't like the melody. It just doesn't stir up emotions in me. Does it stir up emotions in you? |
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