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Emotional Trance from me.
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| passionPunch |
| Cool. Old school vibes. Love the bass. Could use a lot of work on building up to certain elements but nice general idea. |
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| Jonas_Lindelof |
| quote: | Originally posted by passionPunch
Cool. Old school vibes. Love the bass. Could use a lot of work on building up to certain elements but nice general idea. |
Thanx for the kind words, im still quite new in the trance business and trying to evolve the whole time. Any specific ideas of what exactly to focus on to improve?
Regards // Jonas |
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| passionPunch |
Best thing I can really do is give you a good reference track, and compare it to yours. Things like 32 bar intro's, how to vary it up, when the bass should come in. Also how to make these transitions really stand out with fx, really filling out sections etc. Obviously you don't want to copy and paste, but if you imitate something like this several times it will become second nature to you, and then you can start getting really creative.
Theres a lot of cool atmos. sounds you have in the beginning. These work really well, but try introducing them in slowly. The goal is to not be too repetitive, and while you have a really full sounding intro its the same throughout pretty much. Up to 30 seconds sounds nice. When you put the energy into a small build up like that, you really need to have a result after to keep things moving forward. I just feel at some points theres a lul in the flow, just sits still, then finally elements come in again. Obviously this is personal preference.
This is something I usually use.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aKkhJwrUcHU
Here's something I'm working on, just so you can see the variation in the beginning. This is honestly my favourite part; trying to make something really structured unique.
https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u...784/day%202.mp3
Hopefully this helps, feel free to chat back and forth! I'm just trying to help, so if I'm talking out of my ass and you hate my track no worries! A lot of it comes down to what you like, and thats all thats important. |
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