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OZIASO - The Magician
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| Seven Doxian |
any criticism would be cool thanks .
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| AlphaStarred |
This is actually pretty good.
What I don't like is that the snare roll at 1:03 sounds a bit too loud, and the keys in the breakdown are too repetitive. Ever beat has the same key pattern/rhythm, which should be varied I think. Otherwise very good. |
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| Seven Doxian |
| quote: | Originally posted by AlphaStarred
This is actually pretty good.
What I don't like is that the snare roll at 1:03 sounds a bit too loud, and the keys in the breakdown are too repetitive. Ever beat has the same key pattern/rhythm, which should be varied I think. Otherwise very good. |
thanks a lot !! |
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| BOOsTER |
I love the lead both melody and sound.
The breakdown is very nice, you should work on the mastering a little bit, because sometimes the mix is a little too busy and sometimes little messy. Otherwise good job, congrats! :) |
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| Seven Doxian |
| quote: | Originally posted by BOOsTER
I love the lead both melody and sound.
The breakdown is very nice, you should work on the mastering a little bit, because sometimes the mix is a little too busy and sometimes little messy. Otherwise good job, congrats! :) |
thank you ...i learned a lot making this track. |
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| TranceLover007 |
Agree, has some really good potential to be serious candidate for shopping around lol
Darek |
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