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Cure Point (uplifting/progressive)
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| BOOsTER |
This track works much better together than the other one yours (Také my umbrella).
I like how it has this sort of "dirty" retro-ish sound. The mixdown of this track is much better and free of minor annoyances.
The composition is nice and I like the soundquality too.
It does sound a little "different" than what most will be used to, but I mean that in an honestly good way.
The breakdown to the piano at about 2:48 seems a little too abrupt again, though. You could have spent a little more time on that.
But then again the buildup after the piano breakdown is really good. Rather abrupt but in a good way.
Please try to work on the connection of the parts, your tracks are really good. I like them both. But they need a little bit of a touch-up, but obviously, youre a talent! So good luck! |
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| xmofficial |
| quote: | Originally posted by BOOsTER
This track works much better together than the other one yours (Také my umbrella).
I like how it has this sort of "dirty" retro-ish sound. The mixdown of this track is much better and free of minor annoyances.
The composition is nice and I like the soundquality too.
It does sound a little "different" than what most will be used to, but I mean that in an honestly good way.
The breakdown to the piano at about 2:48 seems a little too abrupt again, though. You could have spent a little more time on that.
But then again the buildup after the piano breakdown is really good. Rather abrupt but in a good way.
Please try to work on the connection of the parts, your tracks are really good. I like them both. But they need a little bit of a touch-up, but obviously, youre a talent! So good luck! |
Thanks for czech-ing out my links. Lol, I couldn't resist. Great feedback, it's all true. But I feel too tired to go back as it is. What is done is done. I may revisit it again later and if I do I shall change it according to your suggestion. Thanks again, |
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| BOOsTER |
Haha I would not be able to resist it in your place either. :D
I know this. I never got around to changing tracks I felt I have finished according to no suggestions either. No worries about that. Although, you have the feedback and that might make your next tracks better :) hope you understand. Looking forward to your next tracks. :) |
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