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| John |
download here
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comments and feedback are always appreciated, either positive or negative :)
john |
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| Seventh City |
| the synths remind me of a noemi remix or sumtin, very nice! i love it! uplifting, clenses ur spirits! u shuld get signed ;) |
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| davinox |
Well made. A little on the cheese side, but who cares. :D
Maybe i'd add a little variation, as it gets a little boring, maybe some breakbeat, or a second lead. |
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| John |
| quote: | Originally posted by Seventh City
the synths remind me of a noemi remix or sumtin, very nice! i love it! uplifting, clenses ur spirits! u shuld get signed ;) |
woohoo! thnx 7c:) glad you like it!
| quote: | | Well made. A little on the cheese side, but who cares. |
my inspiration is ian van dahl:D j/k:) maybe youre right...but as you said who cares;)
| quote: | | Maybe i'd add a little variation, as it gets a little boring, maybe some breakbeat, or a second lead. |
ill see what i can do.. a breakbeat shouldnt be too though..its easier then a coming up with a second synthline:)
thnx for feedback! |
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| Endre |
this is nice, but a lil bit cheese, thats rite, but who cares? :D
otherwise is a lil bit thinn, i would like to hear more energy in a track like this, but it very nice mate :)
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| Lightworks |
hey john,
it's a pretty nicely arranged track, but as someone else said, it might get a little boring... try creating a great melody ;) like i'm trying now... hehe.
take care,
Wim |
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| TimeportE |
no worries to in the clear, timeporte is here.. (to didn't make sense! :p)
as usual (i'm starting to be a groupy! :D) i'll download and edit my reply later! :)
*edit i didn't like the beginning of the track.. too simple and i think you can do better, also the way you let the main melody come into the track, not too good if you ask me..
but i liked the qlimax and you added a good underlying layer which supports the main melody.. the sound is a bit commercial as previously said and i think you can do better..
all that i said is ofcourse good ment critizism.. maybe you do a remix and make it feel little bit lighter, more progressive it would do the track good if you ask me! :)
just keep on producing cause your good at it! |
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| oDrori |
| Overall reallyt nice work, very atmospheric, except the main synth :( |
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