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my first trance tune, need pro feedback...
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| MeLtrA |
Took me some time to make this track and now i really need alot of feedback on the sounding..
used reason 2.0 btw..
hope you like it
Meltra - Deep Vision (v16-master).mp3
-énjoy
btw Endre is my kompis... |
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| Endre |
it suck :D j/k
you know my damn comments, but in producing-comments the
technical part is not the best, but better than other amatures, but its your first f0ckin track so its good....
you know why its good? its mastered by me :D
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| Arbiter |
| It's not bad, even though I'm not a huge fan of the lead synth stabs. If this is your first tune, you've got a lot of potential. |
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| Mr.Mystery |
I am IMPRESSED!
Lacks a bit in the perc/bass field and it gets a bit repetitive but it's a great tune nonetheless... |
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| MeLtrA |
| thanx for the comments, hoped for more though :( |
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| TimeportE |
| quote: | Originally posted by MeLtrA
thanx for the comments, hoped for more though :( |
okeej, okeej i'll look into it! :)
*edit you have a very nice build-up nice job there! in the melody i thought you made some strange descisions.. but still a well but together qlimax.. maybe you could make the qlimax a little bit shorter, get the bass kicking a little bit earlier..
but very impressed indeed, not very original but very good nevertheless! :) |
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| JayD |
Not bad at all. For being amatuer the bass and mastering still sounds pretty damn good. I enjoyed the buildup to the climax. What plug in did you use for this?
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| robstar |
VERY NICE!!
And this is your first tune?
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| Endre |
i hate to be rude :rolleyes: but this aint hes first track, he have remixed some of my tracks before, and they are good as this one, but this takes it all. sooo..now i ruind the party :D
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| robstar |
Hehe...That's what I thought.
But it's still good stuff! ;) |
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| MeLtrA |
| quote: | Originally posted by Endre
i hate to be rude :rolleyes: but this aint hes first track, he have remixed some of my tracks before, and they are good as this one, but this takes it all. sooo..now i ruind the party :D
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no, all the tracks befor this one sucked ass... this one is more advanced and sounds 3 times better.. |
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