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New Derb Hardstyle Tune
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| Project T |
Here's a remix I did of a tune DJRavemonkey did, I decided to make it hardstyle for a change :)
Procyon - FSB (Luke Terry Remix)
right click, save target as :)
have fun and please comment :)
Luke :cool: |
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| Project T |
| oh yea, don't download this if you are against swearing ;) |
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| [N]ûk|êû[Z] |
not 3 bad matey, youve got the makings of a pretty damn good hardstyle tune there.
my only gripes are.... even tho harstyle is not the best made genre in the spectrum, i think that it needs a few more layers on it as it does sound a little bland.
As for the break.. i think that this could be maximised by fading in the build up... then kicks in with dirtier riff, and harder stompin' drums.
apart from that, i think this is rather a cool track, but it just needs spicing up slightly, good werk mate :) |
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| jonsimmonds |
after been forced to download this tune i thought id beter leave some feedback!
pretty good just a little bit slow but thats just me being picky!
Jon |
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| oDrori |
| Don't like the way the synths kinda overlap themselves, flow and mastering seem cool though. |
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| DJ-Ande |
woooooooooooo this tunes goood, very good work
whats films the swearing from?? or did u make it your selvs???
nice work:D :D
the main leads abit fruityish but the bass n the rest is awsome:D :D the main lead synth needs toughening up & made rougher |
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| big dave |
| nice tune! nice and bangin :D love the vocals too lol ;) |
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| DaveC |
Sounds cool,
Heres things i think could be made better:
I agree with jay, the track is general sounds abit bland, as in not enuff sound goin on, could be more little effect jobbers.
The kick could be a little mor powerfull and evil.... kinda like the on in this sample i made..
sample
(Yes i know the bass sucks in this sample.. just demonstrating the derb style kick)
The bass line sounds cool, kinda like a SHOKK style, although it sounds weird on my big stereo when i turn it up loud.. sounds kinda distorted but not... ?? :nervous:
Other than that its cool. Those vocals sound mint what uve done with them. and i reckon hard trancers would like it in a club.
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| Project T |
thanks for all the comments so far everyone :)
[N]ûk|êû[Z]: I'll have a fart on with some more effects and stuff :)
jonsimmonds: Get winamp pitchfork u tosser :p
oDori: I'm not sure what you mean, please can u explain some more. And I ain't mastered it btw, I'm gonna get a friend at skool to do it for me in his music class :)
DJ-Ande: The main lead was made in VAZ and is almost identical to the one used in Warduscher - Hardcore Will Never Die (Derb Remix) and I have no idea what the vocal is from, Mike just sampled it for me lol :)
big dave: cheers :)
DaveC: I couldn't get a proper Derb kick so I thought this would do, but now I've heard that it would be interesting to change it. I will add some more effects but the stuff I tried to make it more Derb/DJ Isaac style only seemed to clutter it but I will keep fartin on with it. I now see the problem with the bass and that is just the encoding, the wave it fine thank lol :D |
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| mantisnl |
ok my little review:
-the 2nd kick is a bit 2 loud imo.. it craxx my speakers a bit
-nice bass, but could be a bit more powerfull;)
-i don`t like the vocals.. dunnow why:( they`re just 2 loud:(
-well gotta say.. i really don`t like that main lead, its way 2 weak for an nice hardstyle track.. and its seems like it is a bit false (not the correct notes)
can`t call it an really hardstyle track, i liked ur trancetracks a bit more, sorry:(
grtz,
mantis |
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| oDrori |
| quote: | Originally posted by Project T
oDori: I'm not sure what you mean, please can u explain some more. And I ain't mastered it btw, I'm gonna get a friend at skool to do it for me in his music class :)
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First of all: oDrori ;) Hehe, U Euro guys can't pronounce that eh? :p
2nd: Your friend will only need to turn the mastering from good to excellent though cause this is phine!
3rd what I meant that the main synth feels like each note goes on for two long, perhaps the reverb is too long/loud... |
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| Project T |
| quote: | Originally posted by oDrori
First of all: oDrori ;) Hehe, U Euro guys can't pronounce that eh? :p
2nd: Your friend will only need to turn the mastering from good to excellent though cause this is phine!
3rd what I meant that the main synth feels like each note goes on for two long, perhaps the reverb is too long/loud... |
1: yea we're all spanners :p
2. mint :toothless
3: i see what u mean now and have no idea to fix it, i think a new synth probably is in order ;) |
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