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Oziaso - Across The Skies
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| Seven Doxian |
Ahhh nothing like a warm cup of java , fuzzy slippers , my DAW and some Trance creation on a sunday afternoon....Bliss...Hope you like this one....but if i could ask you , Is it too compressed? ....im trying to make my tracks louder but i dont want to risk too much dynamic loss....Cheers !!
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| deegee |
You again, you jerk :P
I really, really, really like that stuttery build/drop around 2:52, but I feel like it's promising more energy than the next phrase of the track delivers. I like that pad melody, it's very smooth, but I feel like you need something dirty and driving after that build to really pay it off. The kind of lead sounds that Seandroid likes to use would do the trick. |
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| Seven Doxian |
| quote: | Originally posted by deegee
You again, you jerk :P
I really, really, really like that stuttery build/drop around 2:52, but I feel like it's promising more energy than the next phrase of the track delivers. I like that pad melody, it's very smooth, but I feel like you need something dirty and driving after that build to really pay it off. The kind of lead sounds that Seandroid likes to use would do the trick. |
awesome advice man ...im gonna check out Seandriod and see what hes doin ....is the mixing ok ? |
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| TranceLover007 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Seven Doxian
Ahhh nothing like a warm cup of java , fuzzy slippers , my DAW and some Trance creation on a sunday afternoon....Bliss...Hope you like this one....but if i could ask you , Is it too compressed? ....im trying to make my tracks louder but i dont want to risk too much dynamic loss....Cheers !!
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1:11 change my perspective on this track - this bass is not working for you so far man - I like the basic melodic idea you have going on at the moment.
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| deegee |
| quote: | Originally posted by Seven Doxian
awesome advice man ...im gonna check out Seandriod and see what hes doin ....is the mixing ok ? |
He's got some stuff in the WIP thread, and one in a thread I posted a week or two ago asking for best tracks.
Someone like TranceLover007 is way more qualified to opine on mixing than I am. |
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| Seven Doxian |
| quote: | Originally posted by TranceLover007
1:11 change my perspective on this track - this bass is not working for you so far man - I like the basic melodic idea you have going on at the moment.
Darek |
yup the bass was not my strong point and i left this track feelin that so i started working on something else with more emphasis on the bass...almost done of it :) |
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| Seven Doxian |
| quote: | Originally posted by deegee
He's got some stuff in the WIP thread, and one in a thread I posted a week or two ago asking for best tracks.
Someone like TranceLover007 is way more qualified to opine on mixing than I am. |
great ! ill check it out...my trance competition on the flipside forum is this week so its been on my brain ...some great entries if you wanna go check em out and even vote if youre a forum member http://www.theflipsideforum.com/index.php?topic=28273.0 |
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| TranceLover007 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Seven Doxian
yup the bass was not my strong point and i left this track feelin that so i started working on something else with more emphasis on the bass...almost done of it :) |
Sounds good man, will check it out when is ready ;)
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| Mise |
| quote: | Originally posted by Seven Doxian
Ahhh nothing like a warm cup of java , fuzzy slippers , my DAW and some Trance creation on a sunday afternoon....Bliss...Hope you like this one....but if i could ask you , Is it too compressed? ....im trying to make my tracks louder but i dont want to risk too much dynamic loss....Cheers !!
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After the break you should drop to 1:11 maybe adding some percussive element, thats the part you have that has the most energy and drive, then you can bring the pads, making the track more dreamy but with less drive.
The bass is working fine for me, I like the overall balance and mix. Very very good work. |
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| Seven Doxian |
| quote: | Originally posted by Mise
After the break you should drop to 1:11 maybe adding some percussive element, thats the part you have that has the most energy and drive, then you can bring the pads, making the track more dreamy but with less drive.
The bass is working fine for me, I like the overall balance and mix. Very very good work. |
thanks a lot ! i really have to put more into the pads especially on the break ... |
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