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| DJ-Kreing^^ |
Hi there guys
i have been practicing with fruity loops for awhile
and finnally i diceded to creat my own trance tune
so i came up with this melody
no strings, bass nor effects yet
just the melody with the synths
i have no idea how to continue that, i try to add some kicks and bass but it just dont fit... same about the strings...
anyways, tell me what u guys think
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| DJ-Kreing^^ |
BTW
u need to click on the link acouple of time for it to work
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| oDrori |
Hey d00d nice to see your first shot... sample is being DLed ATM...
Done, let's open winamp now:
OKs, so the melody, is pretty harmonicalish :p
But it lacks, well, I call it focus... Like, a direction, which IMO means this melody could either fit a chill track, a breakbeat track, or have this melody as the "Secondary" melody or a background melody of an uplifting choon!
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| DJ-Kreing^^ |
Thanks for the comment oded :)
I think that my purpose is to create an uplifting tune
So the idea of making this melody a secondary melody works for me :)
But, what do u think I should add to the melody in order for it to be in focus?? Harder synths maybe??
Good comment :) thanks for that
More comments are welcome :) |
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| oDrori |
Well, you can either make this a less loud or lower melody, or you can go Rising Star style and have a harsh string/ synth along with, having the classical stings on a volume ratio of about 35-65 with the "Sharper" synth...
Hope this isn't sounding too gibrish :) |
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| DJ-Kreing^^ |
Doesnt sound gibrish at all :)
You are right about the rising star style, i will try to listen to some more stuff by armin to get some inspiration :D
i think the sound in Vincent De Moor - Shamu (armin vab buuren's rising star mix) will be just right.
ill try to low the synths a bit... and add the strings
so that the strings will lead the melody, and the synth will be at the backround
No idea how im gonna do that tho... :D
:rolleyes:
Thanks for the advice man, i really appreciate that!
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| oDrori |
NPs
I was indeed thinking about Armin's Shamu remix :) |
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