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Sean Tyas ft. Cindy Zanotta - Start Over (Michael McBurnie Remix)
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| DJRYAN™ |
first I'd like to congratulate you on finishing your first track.I find that to be so incredibly difficult. I have so many projects that have like 100 things I could do to them and To get to 100%. Good Job Mate!
Anyways, to your track!!
I really liked it. It had flow unlike a lot remixes I've listened to of this track.
just a couple of things. Don't manually dip your volume like a dj in a track. Like a Wave. That's reserved for dj's.
Your snare drum at the break. Shouldn't build up to nothing.
and your main lead is already wide open as your trying to open it.
I'd say you're about 80% there.
Your chorus and beats are on point. Just got put the beams on your break, repeat, and fix her up.
Contest closed but its safe to assume one of these remixes will be played at TomorrowLand. would you want your played there???
I will say I took a shot at this one too.... and mine's not released. But here's what I did with it.
http://djryan.com/tracks/StartOver.mp3 |
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| Burnie |
| Thank you for the constructive criticism! I'll take your advice in to consideration with my next track (which I'm already well on with). |
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| Burnie |
| quote: | Originally posted by sonix
Sorry mine was not constructive, but nice track though. |
Sorry mate, I didn't even realize there was 2 comments haha, I read the first one and hit reply! Happy to hear you like the track though :) |
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