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The Machine That Could Think (pg. 2)
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| Mr.Mystery |
| quote: | Originally posted by Endre
hey nik, you can mail me throught Profile otherwise ;)
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Well I tried but it said I'm not allowed to. :conf: |
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| Boy trance |
Very professional sounding as always... I like the melody, but i thinik it needs something after a bit to keep it interesting cause it may be a lil repetative... otherwise i have no complaints, percussion and use of synths n sound n all is really good!
Keep it up ;) |
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| biznology |
| quote: | Originally posted by Boy trance
Very professional sounding as always... I like the melody, but i thinik it needs something after a bit to keep it interesting cause it may be a lil repetative... otherwise i have no complaints, percussion and use of synths n sound n all is really good!
Keep it up ;) |
hope i dont offend anyone, but here it goes:
as for it 'needing' something more, try Dj Tiesto f. Allure - We Ran At Dawn...
i think thats what youre describing, cause the 2 songs sound AWFULLY familiar. i dunno if thats what its based on, or just a freak coincidence, but the 2 are so similar its scary! :nervous:
nice production tho, very professional and clean. my only complaint is that above...it sounds like the non-magikal remake ver of the above song, just drops some of the synths at the end of the loop. and We Ran has a little something extra after the melody...
again, not accusing you, but that may be where that melody in your head came from! hehe| |
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| Mr.Mystery |
| quote: | Originally posted by biznology
hope i dont offend anyone, but here it goes:
as for it 'needing' something more, try Dj Tiesto f. Allure - We Ran At Dawn...
i think thats what youre describing, cause the 2 songs sound AWFULLY familiar. i dunno if thats what its based on, or just a freak coincidence, but the 2 are so similar its scary! :nervous:
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Hmm... this is interesting...
Well it certainly isn't intentional because I have never even heard We Ran at Dawn...
I'll be definitely doing further investigation on this, though - thanks for the heads up. |
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| biznology |
| quote: | Originally posted by Mr.Mystery
Hmm... this is interesting...
Well it certainly isn't intentional because I have never even heard We Ran at Dawn...
I'll be definitely doing further investigation on this, though - thanks for the heads up. |
yah haha...
im not sure if its the original mix or what, alt i believe so. its uncanny tho! late| |
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| Mr.Mystery |
Well, I checked out the Magikal Remake of it and it indeed has some similarity in the key changes but not really in the melody itself (imho).
Do you think I should change the key changes a bit just to avoid any conflicts? :) |
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| GrimReaper |
Very well produced tune, sounds professional indeed! All the elements work nicely together and the bass and kick are just fine as John said.
It has similarities with We Ran At Dawn, so i hope u get the enhanced melody, u promised to do, working as good as this one..
Great job anyway! |
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| biznology |
| quote: | Originally posted by Mr.Mystery
Well, I checked out the Magikal Remake of it and it indeed has some similarity in the key changes but not really in the melody itself (imho).
Do you think I should change the key changes a bit just to avoid any conflicts? :) |
well the one i was specfically referencing is NOT the magikal remake, but a slower one. it is most likely the original remake, and is actually labeled Allure - We Ran At Dawn on my computer. its slower and more akin to your work. of course it wouldnt take much to distinguish the two! keep working, good job! late| |
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| Lightworks |
nice tune mate, i like it way better than your previous beat project tune you posted up here ;)
keep it up,
Wim |
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| trancedfarmer |
well produced- did you use reason?
i like this- thank you for sharing:happy2: |
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| attacc |
I don't think it's too similar to We ran at dawn.. there is a little similarity but it's no problem at all.
Cool track, except I didn't like the percussion in the intro. |
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| Mr.Mystery |
Thanks everyone :)
I'm making minor alterations to the main melody as well as doing some other improvements... stay tuned. |
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