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New uplifting track needs your opinion
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| TraNcerke |
hi all,
this is my latest track.. I'm waiting to buy a pc but meanwhile i pushed my mc 505 again to it's sequence limit and this is what came out:
right click on the file and click save as
http://users.pandora.be/dezma/Dezma-Promo2.mp3
It is NOT finished, it still needs a lot of mastering and it's recorded way too quiet
Any comment is welcome
thx |
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| TraNcerke |
Fixed the volume problem a bit..
Don't overwhelm me with replys, one at a time plz |
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| Lightworks |
| downloading now, i'll be back later ;) |
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| Lightworks |
It sounded ok to me, more or less... The melody isn't exactly what i would call cheer uplifting trance, but it can go by it... just ;)
Synth sounds are ok, but the drums need more work I think. Perhaps a different melody with these synths would make it really uplifting ;)
Good job so far, keep on working on it buddy ;)
Wim |
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| TraNcerke |
thx for your review wim,
what exactly do you dislike in the melody? I worked a lot on it :( and it was hard work to sequence it playing realtime. Anyway I appreciate your honesty ;) |
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| oDrori |
| Nice work, begins a bit boring IMO, melody is pretty nice, don't like the way the bass kicks in after the breakdown though... I don't know if you meant to achieve this but you have a pretty floaty and mixed up choon there! |
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| Fatboy |
I really like the melody of this one. A very nice blend of a sad and happy progression. But it does need some serious mastering I feel. The kick is much louder than the other elements, and the rest sounds kind of "mushy"(don't know if that's a word:p). With some better mixing and mastering this could be great:)
Peace |
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| trancedfarmer |
| good song. i like the melody personally, its well thought out. |
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| TraNcerke |
thx for reviews,
fatboy I'm glad you felt the emotion in the melody.. I know it's in need of mastering (melody is way too quiet too) but I just don't have the right equipment to do that right now :( .. But I'll certainly redo the track when I have a decent studio mixer and pc. |
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| Haak |
Very nice tune, but I agree with Fatboy
Looking foward to hearing it with better mastering |
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