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Echano - In Your Eyes
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| MaRt |
It's been over half a year since I finished my last solo production 'Over the Waterfall'. Since then I have been struggling to come up with any new material at all, which has proved to be a bit of a downer. But today I finally finished a new uplifting trance track, which I have (badly) titled 'In Your Eyes'. :D
I have uploaded the full mp3 to my webspace in the hope that willing TAers will take a listen and tell me what they think. Thanks in advance!
Echano - In Your Eyes (Original Mix) |
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| [nils] |
Sounds good, m8. :D
don't be afraid to increase the main lead melody. it's a good trancey melody, so it deservs more of the front seats. and you could modify the hats just a bit, and put in somethin' downpitched like a ride (very low level) so that the beats gets more... phat and moving. i mean, so it likes make you move in whilst on the chair and listening to the track [ex: Dario G - Dream To Me (Above and Beyond Remix)] otherwise the bassline is perfect. a good "Above & Beyond" bass, which is VERY good :) it puts the track on a fast train. and master down the hats just a bit. have you heard "Gouryella - Walhalla [AvB remix]"? if you could make the high lead in the buildup, more synthy? IMO it would sound better. but that's only what i think. hehe..
that's all that i can think of. above all, good track! :)
keep on producin' :cool: |
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| Mr.Mystery |
Oh my, this is excellent!
The only negative thing I can think of that the main section doesn't really "explode" when it should - maybe it's just because the main synths aren't loud enough (or because the drums are too loud).
It also felt quite short...
Lemme know if you need a remix ;) |
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| -=Re-GrOoVeD=- |
w0w! This melody is sooo good!! Nice use of the piano, I like it! It's a very good trancer, but as Mr.Mystery already said, the main synth could be louder, it'll make it more uplifting.
Why don't you add vocals?? Heh. THAT would be amazing!
Can I do a remix in future?
Yours,
Blue Arctic Stars |
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| re808 |
nice work, sounds very good. only one thing others mentioned aswell, some power is needed to lead.
what did you use for producing? howcome you get it sound so "clear"?
re808 |
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| Fatboy |
Wow, a very good tune. Nice percussion, and good mastering. I have to agree with the others about the lead though. To me it sounds like you have that kind of chilled lead and the saw lead going on top of each other and "fighting" for room in the mix. I think some improvement could be done there, but excellent tune anyways:)
Peace |
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| Lightworks |
sounds pretty fine mate! only thing missing is the climax... the main lead should be a bit louder at that part i think.
other than that, it could be a damn fine chill trancer ;)
cheers,
Wim |
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| MaRt |
Thanks for all of your comments so far :D
Please feel free to remix as I always love to hear other people's interpretations of my own tracks. As for your pointers I shall certainly try to take your opinions on board and make improvements!
re808 > It was made in Reason 2.
-=Re-GrOoVeD=- > I have always wanted to incorporate vocals into my productions but I don't have a source of them :)
Thanks again. |
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| Bren-F |
Top Quality as usual mate,
But, then I expect nothing less from U. :D
Beautiful melody :D :D |
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| attacc |
| Very good indeed and it sounds very pro in my mind. Maybe you should send it to some labels? |
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| Flotser |
must agree with everyone here! great track! I realy enjoy listening to it.
It also has a very relaxing and dreamy melody, makes me think anout sea and palms and stuff :stongue:
very pro sounds to it also! |
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