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Trance Tracks RELEASES!!!
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| SDD1 |
http://mp3.com/InExistent
please provide feedback!!!
thanx a million
and i am just a beginer!!!
hehe
so be kind!!!
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just released is red clouds
its wicked trance
please provide feedback
http://mp3.com/inExistent |
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| kewlness |
no offense.... but you need a LOT of work on your beats....
first of all... you have like 2 kicks per beat when it should be 1...
it almost sounds like happy hardcore.... :(
second of all... try to use more than just the bass kick for your drums... i think your beats need a lot of work...
on the brighter side... it seems to me that you have a good general idea of how to make synths... but they just don't sound good :(
Most important of all.. TRANCE IS NOT 500 BPM!!!!!! try something around the range of 135-150 BPM... :rolleyes: ... and as for drums... try this basic beat...
X---X---X---X---
----C-------C---
--H---H---H---H-
where X is a bass kick
C is a clap
and H is a hi hat...
what your song sound right now.. is a bunch of random notes and kicks splattered across the whole song...
hopefully you can learn from this and try producing some more decent music... :cool:
good luck! |
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| Trickle |
| Yeah, you've gotta trim down the BPM. Otherwise I think that secret mix has a pretty cool melody. Just slow it down, ALOT. And keep working at it. |
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| SDD1 |
thanx to you 2
i appreciarte your comments
and in no way will I be offended!!!
also did you check the original secret
that one is slowed down and at 135...
also needs a new bass line as it has
noone...
thanx again!!!
more feedback appreciated please!!!
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| SDD1 |
n e more
feedback?
thanx |
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| modular |
| try and copy the drum patterns off of tracks that u like and stick to about 135 bpm. your tracks are far too fast |
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| SDD1 |
or i can just slow down the whole song...
but then you got secret ( original ) which
is the original slow version! |
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| modular |
| now that is a huge improvement, my friend. try and get your synths to sound bigger and concentrate on you mix a bit more. its hard to believe its the same person as the other tunes, i must say:haha: |
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| SDD1 |
new track
called moments
will be released i hope
soon
mp3.com sure takes a while to
approve songs! |
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