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SDD1
http://mp3.com/InExistent

please provide feedback!!!

thanx a million

and i am just a beginer!!!
hehe

so be kind!!!


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just released is red clouds
its wicked trance
please provide feedback

http://mp3.com/inExistent
kewlness
no offense.... but you need a LOT of work on your beats....

first of all... you have like 2 kicks per beat when it should be 1...
it almost sounds like happy hardcore.... :(

second of all... try to use more than just the bass kick for your drums... i think your beats need a lot of work...

on the brighter side... it seems to me that you have a good general idea of how to make synths... but they just don't sound good :(

Most important of all.. TRANCE IS NOT 500 BPM!!!!!! try something around the range of 135-150 BPM... :rolleyes: ... and as for drums... try this basic beat...
X---X---X---X---
----C-------C---
--H---H---H---H-

where X is a bass kick
C is a clap
and H is a hi hat...

what your song sound right now.. is a bunch of random notes and kicks splattered across the whole song...

hopefully you can learn from this and try producing some more decent music... :cool:

good luck!
Trickle
Yeah, you've gotta trim down the BPM. Otherwise I think that secret mix has a pretty cool melody. Just slow it down, ALOT. And keep working at it.
SDD1
thanx to you 2
i appreciarte your comments
and in no way will I be offended!!!

also did you check the original secret
that one is slowed down and at 135...

also needs a new bass line as it has
noone...

thanx again!!!


more feedback appreciated please!!!


:eyes:
SDD1
n e more
feedback?

thanx
modular
try and copy the drum patterns off of tracks that u like and stick to about 135 bpm. your tracks are far too fast
SDD1
or i can just slow down the whole song...
but then you got secret ( original ) which
is the original slow version!
SDD1
???
SDD1
just releases is RED CLOUDS
i think its amazing...

please check it out

http://mp3.com/inExistent
modular
now that is a huge improvement, my friend. try and get your synths to sound bigger and concentrate on you mix a bit more. its hard to believe its the same person as the other tunes, i must say:haha:

SDD1
thank you very much
SDD1
new track
called moments
will be released i hope
soon

mp3.com sure takes a while to
approve songs!
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