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my FIRST song!!! Feedback please!
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| starsurfer |
Hi all!
Finally had time to make my first track. I am using only software... and audio skills.. no keyboard or MIDI.
Song: Sediments
Artist: StarSurfer
URL: http://www.pendarand.com/starsurfer/songs/sediments.mp3
It is a progressive/uplifting track, something different to what we hear these days, different structure and melody.
Let me know what you think, I would love some feedback :)
Cheers
StarSurfer |
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| Flotser |
Your first song?!?! :wtf:
I like it, and enjoyed listening to it...!
good luck then!
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| DJ_TonKs |
Not bad, but it sound to much basic for me, progressive, but not so up^lifting...
Whith the time, you will progress so don't hold down :) |
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| Trickle |
| Wow, for your first mix, that's pretty damn good. You have a good sense in what to use for melodies. I like that a lot. Keep up the good work!!! |
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| modular |
not bad for a first tune . your drums need a lot of work though. they r a bit too detroit old skool to work in a trance environment. keep it up though!
check out mine
http://www.mp3.com/modular1 |
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